Really rhymes cant just happen or can they

i read this from beggining to end and thought it was really good. i am such a danny phantom fan!

:D Thats amazing! It was very very sweet :3. Thanks for writing! I enjoyed it alot

~ Rose

That was a good story I'm going to start reading your other one now!

I think that Jazz saw what was going on during Danny's fight with Skulker. She should of made sure to put up a ghost shield around her house so that Skulker could not go into their basement and change the password of the fenton portal. The next thing that she should of done was to get a weapon from the weapons vault in their basement and get a fenton thermos. Then she should of gone out of the house to shot the weapon at Skulker and thentrap him into the fenton thermos. Jazz did not look out for her brother very well and she was the only one who had the power to stop Skulker from taking Danny to the Ghost Zone. She had failed at her responsibility as a protective older sister because she did not do anything to stop Skulker from taking Danny to the Gosht Zone with him.

Wow not how I thought it would end but still good

It is all Samantha's parents fault that Danny was 3 hours late for meeting up with Sam. If her parents had let Danny into their house, none of the events that had happened in this story would have happened and Danny and Sam would of have gone out in time.

Uh oh this is bad what to do what o do-flies around the room frantically-

You know,if the Manson's had let Danny come into the house, then Skulker would not have been able to kidnap Danny and Danny and Sam would of have had a good Valentine's Day Night out in the town.

I want you to finish finished by midnight tomorrow because if you do, Then I will do something nice for you.

I want you to getr this story finished by tomorrow.

GAH! How could you leave it at that, Ember? DX I was like :O! I know the password! I KNOWS IT T.T! Now I have to read this all the way through. Update soon. Ok?

~ Rose

Ooh skulker changed the pass code and know one knows skulker has a girlfriend this isn't good! I hope Danny can get away from skulker and ember! UPDATE SOON!

U know how they can't track Danny! Well if thy were smart they would track Skulker because he has Danny right? Oh and one more thing -charges ectoblast- sorry but it has to be done

Uh oh so much for perfect!