I didn't like this. I mean, I did but I didn't. It feel incomplete. And kinda like it doesn't make sense. Cat was just there taking it saying how heartbroken she was and how Jade didn't love her and all but Jade was all vulnerable and crying. She never asked or mentioned or anything. It was never acknowledge why. And if it was cause Jade did love her and didn't want to end it, then. . Yeah, feels incomplete.

The only reason I managed not to cry was the fact that someone else was in the room...*sniff* But - but you should write more Victorious pairings! Without guys *cough cough*

Sad in a really good, realistic way. Maybe work on finding more original ways to describe things, such as describing Cat's heartache as something other than "a hole in her chest". Overall really great.

Fangirling Sidenote: I knew exactly which picture of Liz you based Jade's look off of in the room scene ;)

It was good . But sad :/ .. But it gets to your heart ;)