I was surprised by your twist! I thought it was some kind of alternate universe where Naruto's father would still be alive and Sasuke older than Naruto. But no. That was interesting and quite fun, not my favourite to be honest, but I liked it. Thanks!

Loooove it!

so usually i have this thing about fics with vast age differences. kind of freaks me out a little. but i am happy that i made it through this. I will definitely be checking out the unedited version haha i just kind of don't get why sasuke kept booting naruto from his room though? anyway, good times lol ciao for now

lol *fangirl screaming*
i cant even say how much i love the twist. I m not much in the idea of a 13 y.o Naruto and adult Sasuke you know, but i decided to give it a try and read it anyway. And, ooooooh, when i came to the end , i was like "OMG xhoiuxyoiuaoihyenaeb!"

It was so so so cute and lovely when Sasuke says "For a moment I thought you might just have developed a teacher-student kink"
you know, to me, the ending made it all become so lovely to me
and now i have to look for the uncut version. where is it again?
i m gonna go for adult fanfiction then

Oooooooooooh, now I get it, in the beginning I was like- what's going on?
Then I saw what you did there... (grins*) I like it, they're some weird couple but
I can't stop loving them c:

ohmygodthat was so awesome, and the way you had those subtle hinrs of the truth of the situation, that I took as naruto being the hokage's sin, ingenious, amazingly done, good job, good job.

I have to say, that masturbation scene, including the bit afterwards, was priceless. And the twist was unexpected, of course. I'm going to have to check out Y!Gallery or AdultFanFiction to see the unedited version of this! Well done!

Don't feel embarrassed about your younger self, and early crushes. It was a fairly normal response - that's one way people develop their sexual identities and begin to establish what does and does not attract them. Besides, it could've been a lot worse than some nameless actor.

Oh, and not always hopeless - a guy I knew when I went to college the first time, his Dad was a prof that married a student (that being how he came to exist.)They had a 30 year age difference. (And I got told the story because I wouldn't date him over a ten year difference... I was a bitch, wasn't I? But, I just couldn't see someone that much older staying with childish me!)

And, the story was kind of cute. A little, umm, questionable, but cute nonetheless.

It was a little bit sad when Naruto said he was wondering what his life would be like if his father was alive.

But! I still loved the story. It's a very interesting story idea and I enjoyed it very much. Glad you got one million words!

Neat twist at the end; after re-reading it, I now get the little hints you dropped along the way!

Well-written and sweet. I thought you did a fantastic job! )

Nice story, I like how you put the little hints in the 'kid-Naruto' parts.

I think this is adorable and had no idea what would happen next which is awsome cause its nice when you can't guess the what will be as you read...love the suspense! I just love the way Sasuke lets Naruto pull him into all these different situations and how he just spoils him completely. He went along with it all and enjoyed it in his own way. I can only imagine the shock of the villagers and can picture just how much fun Naruto had as he played around. It was nice for a little while for him to pretend to be him...cause I think all kids at some point pretend to be grown up and respected like their parents. (Or at least the ones that have parents worth being respected. I know some may not fit that catagory and thus will never inspire their kids to wish to be like them.) But I enjoyed this story TOTALLY! I so have a list of favorite actors I had a huge crush on and its such a nice feeling to remember too! AWSOME STORY! :)

This was kind of sad, actually.

I mean...nice. But sad.

Great story! Totally threw me off when you added that whole Naruto isn't actually 13 twist in there but I have to say it did make a whole lot more sense. Thanks for the entertainment! .