This was a great story! The show always hinted Zane getting a rival for Jo’s attention but didn’t really follow through, and this would have been a great way for it to play out.

yay they're engaged! an amazing epilogue! and amazing story.. so to sum up..AMAZING! please write another eureka fanifc sonn, i love ur writting!

YAY! so relieved that Jo isnt dead! such an amazing story and i am sososososososoooo glad that Jo isnt dead... I was properly crying when she died! an AMAZING story!

jo's...dead...? :'( an amazing story but i cant believe Jo is dead...

amazing is all i can say.. cant wait to read the next chapter!

What a lovely touch! I'd definitely call this giving them their happy ending. It was a sweet way to cap things off (and a really amusing touch from Stark).

There were two great moments of surprise for me: the first when I thought Jo was going to go after Marcus back in time and the second when I thought they were going to have to take out General Mansfield. You did well hiding the ball-I guess I was so caught up in the action that I was willing to go along with the fakeout. Again, I thought your twists on the familiar were well done. I especially liked how you played General Mansfield and also the last scene of course. This has been a wonderful, crazy ride (in all the best ways).

YAY Jo got her happy ending! So glad she and Zane could be together finally and that she didn't hesitate when he proposed. So sweet!

This is great, im curious about those loose ends as I cannot recall any, but I look forward regardless

As for the deleated scene, I wish I had seen it, but I cannot get hold of the season DVD in order to watch it - oh please tell me what it was, I'd really appreciate it or even better if you know of a link where I could watch it, I've been searching for months :)

AW! I'm so glad Marcus and Beverly got taken care of, and the 5 weren't sanctioned (along with Zane and Grace). I loved the part about Zane shocking the general. That was pretty funny :D. Waiting for the epilogue!

Nice work Jo! Marcus and Beverley are so going down. It's great seeing her in her element. I like the character exploring scenes of course but sometimes it's great to see Jo totally kicking ass. You wrote a really nice conversation between Jo and Zane, to see them acknowledge and reconcile their insecurities in the relationship. It was pretty insightful. The beginning with Zane getting completely befuddled by Jo's lingerie was hilarious but I like that he got over it and put his cards on the table.

And an interesting monkey wrench in their understanding of things given iStark's hypothesis. On pins and needles!

Wicked chapter. Loving Zane's protectiveness.

One question: At the beginning is Jo back to looking like Jo or does she still look like the scientist who impersonated her? Zane was acting and talking like she was back to being herself.

Great chapter. -jw'chan -

Love the Dead Like Me reference - one of my favorite shows. Also really, really like Jo taking out all the guys in the woods. I really like Jo because of how tough she is and we don't get to see that nearly often enough. Looking forward to the next chapter!

AWWWWWWWWWW that is so sweet that Zane didn't want Jo going out there and got completely "sidetracked". :D Very cute. Hope he can convince her to stay and Mansfield didn't find out before Marcus tries to kill her again or escape. Can't wait for more!