Reviews for Clothes Off!
The Grae One chapter 1 . 5/3/2017
"Pretend it's wrestling!" Oh sweet heavens, I don't think I've ever laughed this much, this early before. And that phrase that started it all? "For all your OT7 trampoline porn needs"? My new favourite. Definitely inspiring! Definitely good stuff!
general zargon chapter 1 . 3/29/2015
LOL, awesome. I loved that comment Lambo made about getting scarred for life long before finding them on the trampoline - it made me laugh so hard I was glad I wasn't drinking anything. :P I wish you the best of luck on your writing, and I hope you write more for this fandom!
armysugakookie chapter 1 . 3/27/2014
im sorry to say that i dont get what the hell is happening...
I am a fluffy penAccountKilled chapter 1 . 5/1/2013
LOL. Awesome...Wait what?
Rin's Adoptive Mommy chapter 1 . 12/27/2012
O_O...I'm not even sure what just happened...but I know I was entranced by it.
MockerDelight chapter 1 . 9/2/2012
It's funny how well it works! Completely cracky though.
3 cups 0f tea chapter 1 . 8/10/2012
Still trying to make sense what the heck just happened while giggling my butt off. :))))
Xoe-Indigo chapter 1 . 6/24/2012
BUAHAHAHA

This part "And this is all nuts, and somebody's going to get an elbow where it'll hurt, and I don't want it to be me!"

"Did everybody hear? The Tenth gave an order. Watch your elbows!"

Had me cracking up do hard! XD

I will never look at trampolines the same way again. Lol
Kotoshin chapter 1 . 4/25/2012
THere needs to be more fic like this in the world. Not quite smut, not quite fluffy-safe-for-all-ages family devotion, not quite smoldering-burning-passionate love ... I think the OP fandom called first dibs on the name for it: nakama-shipping. XD

Really, there's too much limbs and bodies involved to be DESCRIPTIVE smut, but oh, the thought of them all piling together for warmth like kittens under a blanket in a basket. XDDDD
ben4kevin chapter 1 . 12/17/2011
haha this was great
skepsis66 chapter 1 . 8/24/2011
0o0... BAHAHAHAHAHA! This is the most ridiculous shit I've ever read! I couldn't really make heads or tails of it (or maybe I could but just wanted to ignore all the implications) but the sheer craziness of it all was awesome. Ryohei was the best though: "Pretend it's wrestling!" I goggled and then fell on the floor laughing. Brilliant!
the real poison ivy chapter 1 . 7/13/2011
AWESOME TO THE EXTREME!
TheMcgabster chapter 1 . 3/16/2011
THAT WAS GREAT! i wish i was on that trampoline *giggles*
sweet-and-simple chapter 1 . 3/15/2011
Oh, goodness! I have never before read of such an orgy, but if they were all written like this - you can bet your sweet ass I'd read them.

This was funny, smutty, and yet held a hint of family all in one! Ryohei really knows how to take charge of the situation!
builtbymachines chapter 1 . 2/6/2011
Mmm, orgies...

:]

Gotta love 'em!
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