Very very good. A few grammatical errors but you had a sound plot and minimal OOCness. Very descriptive imagery, too, and I'm not ashamed to admit you made me cry once or twice.

Just now found this fic and I have to say it was AWESOME!

Loved it! Especially all the bottom Dean. Love him the most!

cas did it cas did it right? he put the pants on the hood. awwhe still watches over dean but isnt cas supposed to smell like ozone layers and, and? i have no clue great third chapter at least dean knows he's changing but i wish he would end up finding out he's pregnant or sommething that would be funny because i also have a thing for mpreg. love the story see u in ch4

Yeah dominating castiel i love him! first chapter i was a little confused as to what was going on until the end then in all put together why he was in the garage but you made the best sex scene with dominant cas i still like it when dean is on top just love dominant cas more tan dominant dean. see ya in ch3

read this fic was orgasmic(sometimes literally), i can't thank you enough for the blessing that is this fic! blessed be!

jesus,fucking mary and joseph! that was so bloody hot! im dizzy here! your fic is a present of the gods! blessed be!

This is such a great story! Thanks for sharing!

Ok this chapter was pure loveee 33333333 I love it. So much feeling 3 I especially love the part where Castiel says 'the way I want you is in me' For pervier it may sound, in such a context it's one of the sweetest things I've seen.

Great job 3

oh wow :D

to the hell with naïve, go Cass xDD

To tell the truth I think Castiel could have been more loving rather than eager, like Dean lol And as for Dean, comparing with Sam, seems that he would be the the kind that is gentle in bed, cause as far as I've seen, there are feelings involved whenever Dean gets laid. As for Sam... he's like.. I came, I saw it, I conquered it. lol he's the angry sex guy.

But still, I like how you made them so eager, or as Dean put it, about to spontaneously combust lol ! good job ;D

waaa this is sooo Dean-like-way to see things xD Some expressions seem to have come straight from his collection xD

My favourite line is every "craptastic day seems to bleed into the next" it conveys all the idea of a sucky and painful life, the way he feels at the momment. Not to mention the words craptastic (lol love it) and your choice of verb on bleed :D perfect 3 I'm reading the next chaps now :3

I loved this story! Its so well written... and really hot! I'm glad they got their happy ending, the last chapter was really good. well done- keep it up, i'm off now to start reading your other fic! :)

YAAAY I love this tory, sad to see it go. Great writing :] I'll be waiting for the next fic!

I am very happy to see this happy ending. The last review I left, it sounds like me angry but I am not. I was impressed but very upset! Hence this happy ending is very pleasing more than ever.

I was very impressed with your idea of Castiel's scar. It was very unexpected but very bizarrly romantic.

Hmmm. Vampire Dean... I am not really into it. I know nowadays many people think of vampires as pale faced teenagers but for me, they remind me of Gordon, the twisted but sympathetic monster. I think Dean would be like him, understanding what kind of creature they are. But I know when you said, Vampire Dean, it doesn't mean it that way. Have your imagination do the works...

It was very sad but romantic, torturous but hot story. Thanks for the good works.

I loved this story! it is really good :)

The end chapter was hot.. sisser and of course i nagged you to finish it was a great story -smiles- can't wait for your next -s-