I want to read more! Such an awesome story!

Such an intriguing plot setting and introduction of Ichi/shiro...I really do hope that you at least consider continuing this one...it really is interesting and Ichigo's emotionally withdrawn character is a nice change of pace from his usual almost hackneyed portrayal.

and I vote ur assets getting flamed if u no update this in...say, another month. XD jk

I was supposed to be writing a new update...but then I got distracted and started reading this fic..XD Thanks ;)

Man, Ichigo's a bit of a nut-case, ne? And Shiro, running off to live with the carnies...somehow, I can actually picture him doing that. And it's a really funny picture! XD

I didn't realize Ichi's dream was a dream, so I started freaking out when Ichigo started monologuing (?) about how Shiro was dead. Twas very upsetting!

Anyway, update soon please, yadda yadda.

And thanks for writing this :) It's great so far!

Holy crap. o_o please pretty please write more. This is seriously good. I love the writing style, and pfft, icchi? A headcase? Noooo. /lolol/

But icchi as a headcase seriously is pretty awesome.

Sooo ... Give us moremoremore please? :D

love it please more

:D this is unbelievably marvelous! It was a pure JOY to read!

so... really like the story so far. you did an awsome job on it. it is amazing. and yes, ichi is a bit of a head-case, but you wrote it so well! please update asap

Love it! Want to read the next.

Do I smell a Uke-Shiro/Hichi story or am just reading to far into it? I hope Shiro/Hichi is uke, there are not enough stories with him as uke. Can he please be uke? Please?

Darker and more serious in deed! I've been meaning to review for a while now...*looks away in shame*

I love how you described everything and how you chose to make Ichigo an agoraphobic. It's an interesting fear that not many people seem to notice or take into account that it exists. It's nice seeing Ichigo not being the big tough guy in a story for once. Also...stupid Shiro! He shouldn't have been teasing the drunk bastard. XD

You've got me hooked and I can't wait to see where you take this.

Please update soon

The detail is brilliant and i hope you add more to this soon :3

i liked it. :)

i think that it was a greatread personally and i thought it would take off somewhere else, but it stayed true (dark and mysterious). Overall...AMAZING!

I like. Its dark but not depressing. Can't wait for the next.

~Lyn

Wow nice opening chappy! Is ichi the uke in this story?