Your story was very nice, although some of the vocabulary was hard to me (I'm french and trying to learn english). You have perfectly respect the two characters, I think Kimblee is very hard to keep close to the manga.
Thanks for writting this !

I enjoyed this. I love how he is shot down and is like meh I still like her. I can see that happening. And then Riza killed it with her sharpness gosh I love how she busted his bubble, but that was hella forward!

Wow, I was pretty sceptic about Kimblee/Riza, but I gave it a chance because of the nice summary and - I'm shocked! In a good way, naturally! 8D I can't remember when I squealed out loud because of the fanfic, but I did now, at the end. Fantastic job you did there! You kept them both in character and I can completely see Kimblee liking Riza on that way! He does seem like someone who would have 'thing' for uniforms.

Descriptions are fantastic! Especially when you describe how Riza looked and walked, you really captured her attitude through it and the moment.

The details about "cat and mouse game" in which Kimblee is cat are amazing. And the sentence "Unlike the prestigious and ever loudly kissing Mustang, he preferred not to kiss and tell." really made me smirk!

And their interaction - wow! Short and sweet, perfect as it is! I love Riza's sharp tongue and Kimblee's "sweet" talk.

But "Any 'celebrating' we would do would be done on my terms, not yours." She murmured into his ear in a sultry whisper" is most definitely my favourite part, it's where I squealed! I pictured it so vividly and I love how it all sounds.

So, all in all, great job you done here, you have nice style of writing and you did justice to characters, I really enjoyed in reading this fic! _

Really well writen, fantastic descriptions, and I thought you had Kimblee's personality captured perfectly.

Haha! I loved it! Kimblee, you sly dog. I love how you portrayed him, and I loved Hawkeye's no-nonsense attitude. You portrayed the both of them very well. (: Good job. -

Wow,so simple,yet I have to say,the stories great,and it's written very nicely:)

SO GREAT! the description is so awesome!

please! I beg you! Create a multi-chaptered fanfic about the pairing KIMBLEEXRIZA! I beg you! please!

lol, poor kimblee. he really doesn't know what he's getting himself into w/ riza. great work : )

This is very nice. Kimblee's thoughts are very in character. Keep writing! _

This was very well written. It took an interesting perspective through the RizaxKimbley relationship rather than the usual Royai. And the end was done very nicely with Riza displaying just how good she is at the game. xDDD

You writing is captivating. I could more than practically feel the lust. :)

'Those soft hazel eyes were really only soft because of the color. The person behind them was hard as nails and twice as sharp.' That's a very accurate assessment. And damn, Riza sure knows how to shoot a guy down. XD I love this...Riza seems like she has seen it all, she's a very good player in 'the Game' and that's what attracts Kimblee...I like how you show that.