Awesome Story

I would totally read that comic if you made it

awww the volociraptor thing is cute! I'm a huge nerd for all things Paleobiology related and have been since I was 8 so it always feels nice to have some who feels the same way even if it's something as small or simple as velociraptor being a fun word.

Lol wish my brother and I had cool nicknames like Umbrella Man and Freak...

Very good.

I keep coming back to this fic, I love it so much! I love the way you portray John, it really captures the fact that he isn't just Sherlock's sidekick bt is actually a really cool character.

for a second i was very confused. I thought I had been thrown into the matrix lol. I am loving this fanfic

Oh my gosh nooooo! Why is this not finished? I love the BAMF!John in this story. So, so good! Please come back to it? Follow follow follow!

Great writing style, captured sherlock's personality perfectly, along with all the details and deductions, awesome story

Love it!

This is SO good. Don’t stop please!

Love this story. Too bad it's not finish.

This is my second read through and I have to say, this is the best case fic I’ve ever read. I absolutely adore your characterizations, and the humor is spot on. I know it’s been a long time since this was updated, but I can hope! Thanks for the great story so far though.

Ah, I'm rereading this for the millionth time, even though I'm not even in this fandom anymore...you're so talented, I always come back to this story, regardless of my current obsession! I know it's been 5 years and it'll likely never be finished, but you've touched a lot of people with your writing. We miss you, hope you're well 3

I really like this. It can be fun to see what people on the outside think of the friendship between Sherlock and John. I especially like the Lestrade chapters, although I'm not sure they're quite in character. I think Lestrade and Sherlock have a slightly better/more friendly relationship than that, at least when Sherlock isn't completely annoyed/frustrated with him. I still liked reading his POV though.

Also, I totally knew that Moriarty was involved from the first mention of the word "semtex". What you did with the acronym was clever though. :)

I'm really enjoying this, and I think it has great potential. You should finish it! Plus, that was an awful cliffhanger to leave us on (I can't say I don't understand ending chapters that way, because I have to admit that it's fun to do, plus it can do great things for the story, it's just that there's not another chapter AFTER the cliffhanger, and I really want to know what happens. Please? ).