Please continue

GAH! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! I NEED TO NOW GO AND READ SOME VALDUGGERY! Despite my preference for Valduggery, you do have good talent and should keep writing if it is something you enjoy.

FUNNY anyway i think it needed a bit more persanality like Skulduggery wouldn't have any spelling mistakes or shortcuts (like h8 which means hate) but i do think their could have been more people trying to kill more people XD

on chapter 8 -_- im dissapointed

Valkyries reflection EVIL...
Backstabberphsycomanipulator : Hey, I pretending to be best buddies with valkyrie, but the thing is IM A REAL PERSON NOW. I killed carol im gonna kill valkyrie and everbody she knows, including tanith, cause ive got a septre and Im evil.

I think there are a few holes in her plan. Her kill Tanith? like to see her try. If she tries to kill valkrie surely she'll turn into darquese and crush her. Hope so. DONT WANT IT TO END LIKE THAT

You should change Sanguines name to Texass.

THAT WAS SO FUNNY KEEP GOING

On one of the 'ilovevalkyrie'you have made a mistake' down towards the bottum, cool though. :)

What's up with the UPDATE followed by letters and numbers?

That was actually pretty funny.

Now don't take this the wrong way... but are you a guy or a girl? Soz but I can't be sure by the profile pic. If you take offense, don't reply.

~AngelOfTheUndead2

Aww, i hope you can update soon, i've missed this story ! Facebook and Fanfiction addictions are the best, along with youtubing... ;) NO INTERNET IS A GOOD THING ? Wait until they see you go outside and not come back for ages because you're out with friends... :L

It's okay, but just update soon!

Dreams and nightmares?Thats kinda freaky, because my assesment piece on lord of the flies in english was called work!

This is a really good story, I loved Fletcher's line at the end :)

Reia xx

O dars cul