Aww, so adorable and funny!

I can't handle the adorableness. :)
This was fantastic.

I like this. They are figuring out their feelings for each other. Very sweet.

This was fun!

Aw, a really warm little slice o'life viggie. Had a great feel to it, and I thought your characterizations were spot on and well-observed.

Enjoyed it tons...now I need to get a chunk of time to read something longer of yours! :) Looking forward to it!

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loved it.

How lovely! I'm in the process of reading your fics, and I just want to say that you are really good!

I love it! Hint of Luke/Leia and not. More chapters!

That was precious. I loved it. :D

Nice story :) Very cute moment between the unbeknown twins :) As a former swimming teacher, I found your descriptions quite realistic :)

Great job! keep it up!

Love

Mireille '.'

This is absolutely lovely. I'm about to gush but I'll try not to make it too long ;o) I love the confusion you created in Leia as regards her relationship with Luke. She is sure of her feelings toward him but not sure what they mean; I understand this because I know that love of a brother can be even more intense and touching than that of a close male friend, while never approaching anything even remotely physical or romantic. Such a relationship would be inexplicable if they didn't know they were siblings (much less twins, though I know less about that).

The only way the movies could really flesh out that aspect was through Han's jealousy; he could fathom their closeness without being able to establish the nature of it, and that makes sense because it is something he isn't a part of. I loved how you showed that here with just a few lines from Solo. I also loved the peek into Leia's thoughts regarding Han, because her feelings for him are almost the antithesis of hers for Luke, not only because she feels attraction for Han but because she cares for him in a way that can be very scary when you feel it for a stranger, not in the sense of the rather comfort-love she feels for Luke.

I also liked that L&L had another shot at their childhood while playing in the water. And although it's amazingly obvious, I liked how you pointed out Luke wouldn't be able to swim or might've even never taken a bath.

And excellent fic and I hope you have more.

I love this story! In the book 'Splinter of the Mind's Eye' Luke can swim but Leia can't and I allways thought that that was stupid.
Really good work!

[i] "I don’t know what I’d have done without you either." Taking her arm again, they started back into the woods. "Probably ended up drowned on some water world," he murmured. [/i]
:D The ending was superb

this is such a good story! the luke and leia brother/sister relationship is so cute!