OMG! so cute n luke is so right they obviously like each other

I love how you were leaning on the fourth wall about the timing of alien invasions. The only SJA I can think of that wasn't set in the fall was Death of the Doctor, because the trees were full of pink blossoms.

This would have been a brilliant series end on The Sarah Jane Adventures. Loved it! Is it really your first? You write like a pro! :)

I really like this. It was really witty at the beginning and really sweet at the end. :) please write ore like this.

Can I say off the bat, that this doesn't seem like it's your first fic. It has the feel of someone who has been writing fics for ages. In fact, I can't find a single mistkae with it. You seem quite the excellence writer. Keep up the good work. I look forward to reading more from you.

This is your first fic? It's fantastic! Just one tip but do't let it get you down: Maybe a few attepts to do with secret-keeping explained a bit? But it was a brilliant story nevertheless. Please write more clani!

Awww sweet! Loved it! LL

Very enjoyable to read, a nice get away to a fantasy world that's sweet with a streak of humour. A large streak of humor! And that's good, of course. A lovely plot with character staying in character and nicely written. Points of improvement, well this is a really nice story, and everything is on the same level. I suggest trying to aim higher; longer plots, more complex writing, and more interaction (if you have already done this, I apologize, just trying to make a good review).

In all, a lovely nice distraction, give some more effort, it can be a masterpiece.

All the best,

Aldurnamiyanrandvora, House of Dvora

Great story love it