Bro this would make a perfect story you should totally make it longer its sooo good.. i will love you forever! pleaseeeee if you dont want to post it, its fine just send it to me! i love youuuuu.

hehe, it was good :)

So cuuuuuuuuuute! Ah the adorableness overtakes me!

aw poor sebastian

Gotta have a sequel I wanna see what their date is like plus ciel is sooo cute

Wow.

Poor Sebby-kun.

I only read one fic before this where Ciel and Grell were the couple, so points for originality. In my stories I usually turn Grell into somewhat of a motherly-tsundere that offers Ciel advice. Good job!

This isn't awful. Your story was recommended to me by DarkAngel048. And i'm glad i read. Few mistakes here and there. But great so far. Keep up the good work. -MaloraVurHortson13

oh DANG! I love it :D GrellXciel is my guilty pleasure!

Um, I hope he was doing that to make Sebastian jealous... Sure made me jealous :p

Awwww, poor Sabastian! T_T

I don't like the pairing, but thankfully it isn't M rated or I might just puke. It was cute fluff, which if fine, and I must admit Sebastian's jealous side is always a pleasure to see.

Other then that your wording, grammar and spelling were great. And I am doubly happy that I didn't half to correct any lines or names in this.

It was good, fluff.

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let this be some twisted plot that grell wanted to get to sebby through ciel sebbyxciel ftw!