I see a lot of potential with this universe. I like how the characters have personalities and are unique, with out feeling too out there. One thing that I really liked, though, is the character development of the charmander in the story. He goes from being scared, and not being able to fend for himself, to a very capable charizard. I would love to see more of the backstory being expanded on to see about their character. Of course, I enjoyed the other parts, too. I look foward to the development of the story, and any other creations. Hopefully the writer's block can heal!

I thought that this was really interesting, and I see a lot of potential here. I liked the characters and sense of progression. The characters feel unique and interesting, and I liked the backstory of Drac, and how he was a scared little charmander, into a comfortable and brave charizard. I would like to see the story of the pokémon expanded upon, and it could be really hooking. Of course, I like all of the other stuff, too, but these were my thoughts. Am looking foward for more creations from you!

good story.
like yaoi bestiality stories, especially ones involving pokemon or dragon fucking their trainers (ash or OC x pokemon like charizard, lucario, mewtwo, and toothlessxhiccup) and breeding them (aka pushing eggs to grow in their ass)

Hi there, pal. Long time no see.
I'm glad that you are still alive, and that you haven't abandoned Drac yet. ;)
I will repeat the same as I told you on Deviantart so long ago: take your time, don't force the writing. It is better if it takes long but thye quality is good and YOU like it than fast just to finish it and crappy. I like your style a lot, and the care you put in your characters, so I obviously don't want that to change, even if I have to wait a little longer.
Take care and good luck.

how ducking tall is you trainer? I mean really? taller than his charzard. unbelievable. he has to be at least 7" tall. I love your story but shut like this is. hard to ignore.

"which" isn't an adjective. so why does he dislike the word. oh, and please learn to use grammar.

I'm very happy you wrote this story and I'm looking forward to when you get your inspiration back! I'm new at writing, but know that you have a fan! ;)

Is this story dead? I really enjoyed it so I hope there is more to come soon.

Wassup, nice story you have created. It is very informative and does a great job of actually making the readers want to have more. I like how you have surprises at every corner, and it amazes me how you and other great people write such great stories.

One of the best I have read in a while! Especially about it being about two males, and you successfully created a great work of art!

However, the grammar and spelling could be looked at, but that's just it!

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WHY DID YOU LEAVE IT AS A CLIFFHANGER T_T

My teeth just rot after reading It cute!

Hopefully you get to feeling better I look forward to it when you do

I'm truly sorry to hear this, I know whats it like to be deeply depressed. I've been like this sense the age of 9(i'm 20 now). I'm half-way done through college getting an associates degree in Electrical Engineering tech and Industrial Electricity. I found this site 2 years ago and love reading these stories. I read them every day after class. Don't lose hope in life, t will get better I promise. we make our own happiness.

Don't try to kill yourself like that retard said. most of us are with you. Don't give up hope if it is really terrible than things can only get better. get better soon
Saysayashi

I'M VERY SORRY TO HEAR THIS, I GENUINELY HOPE THAT YOU FEEL BETTER SOON, AT THE VERY LEAST SO I CAN ENJOY YOUR WONDERFUL WRITING ONCE AGAIN.

GET WELL SOON,
YOUR PAL
ZOODLE.