i love it, its good

Awww, no more story. I was expecting another chapter. :(

Interesting... Could be schizophrenia.

Well this looks promising...

Whoa. Intense. Does she realize that no one but a vampire would be able to do anythng to her? Very intriguing story so far, I can't wait to see where it goes. Great job! Keep riting! -Emma

that sounded VERY interesting! :) I hope you continue this

Oooh so thats what esme does on her days home

she really needs to take up a hobby or perhaps a job maybe

Bad Carlisle for sneaking up on Esme like that he could have gotten hurt w/ that knife lol yea right

okay i looooov this

still i cnt wait to find out WHY Esme is so parionied

cnt wait 2 read more

plz update soon!

Ooh, I wonder what Carlisle is doing there! Update soon ;)

It kind of sounds like she is having flashbacks to her human life. Why would she be afraid of someone attacking her? Unless it's another vampire, they can't hurt her.

Intriguing. I want to know more.

Nice :)

Update soon!..interesting plotline!

This sounds interesting! I can't wait to read what Esme is so worried about ;)

This sounds interesting! I can't wait to read what Esme is so worried about ;)

wow this is really good

although i have one question

What the heck is wrong with esme?

but the suspence is good

i cnt wait till the nxt chap

'update whenever u can

cnt wait to read more

Jade