HAHAHA putting Pinky and the Brain in this story was a good idea. It was a bit short but was still finny to read.

A lively approach to Knightmare! Very funny, especially when the identities of the intruders are revealed at the end! Well done overall.

I'd just like to say that your first sentence is worded wrongly. If you say 'Knightmare was 'too quiet' the way LOTR is 'really famous', then you must mean that Knightmare is actually REALLY quiet. But you don't. Saying 'really busy' or 'really hectic' or something will work better.

Oh my...that was great! Pinky and the Brain? Lol, I used to love them when I was younger - I still do! I must admit, I was wondering about those first few lines...but what a twist! Lol!

*wanders off, still sniggering under her breath*