Thank u, loved it

NAthan and Haley make love on their wedding night

this story totally rocked it showed how two people became one in body, mind and soul you are a very gifted writer so romantic just what first times should be like

Wow…I think you did a beautiful job on this special night for them. You really showed the love that is between them. Great job.

Amazing! This is by far the best story about their first time. I totally see it happening like this. Well, done you're the first one who got it right

This is pretty much how I've ever imagined naley's first time. Your words were so sweet and gentle. They're my ideal couple and, in my opinion, you've nailed them down! great job. :)

Perfect. You were really accurate with the characters and it was just beautiful. (:

this was fantastic. the best Naley first time fic i have ever read. so true to characters and perfect in every way. keep writing. loved it.

I cannot believe this one shot only has 2 reviews! It baffles me, seriously. This was THE most amazing Naley piece I have ever read, honestly. It was so true to their characters and I can imagine it happening exactly as you wrote it. So beautiful. I love the description of how Nathan was as much of a virgin as Haley was in respect to making love. Simply amazing. Thank you so much for this one shot! I fell in love with Naley all over again.

I loved this one shot... great work! It was one of the best one shot of their first time with this one : . Have you heard of it? Anyway, what I always wanted to read about their first time was... what happened AFTER their first time... like during the night and the morning after. What were Haley's thoughts? I've never found a story about that. Have you?

Again, great one shot... their feelings were perfect!

This was so sweet and perfect. You did an amazing job. I love it!