It is cool! Continuous please! :,D I love!

oh I like where this story is going, I really hope you can update soon

Uwaaah, I only found this today! But it's looking really cool so far! I definitely want to see more~ Hope you can update again sometime soon, and I'm really enjoying it! Keep up the good work!

HEY! I disapear from FF for several weeks and come back to find not One but TWO chapters of Dropin! you are now my favourite person! I am now really looking forward to the next chapter! I also wanted to say that someone else made a comment that sometimes your fight scenes don't flow as nicely as your other chapters, however I suspect that might be becuase your other chapters flow so nicely that when you do have a fight scene it's not that they don't flow but that they don't flow as well as the other chapters. well any ways I can't wait for the next chapter!

Aww! Arthur is so fricken cute in this chapter!

Anyways, great job and I hope the new chapter comes out soon. c:

/spazzes/

i've TOTALLY read this before, i totally remember Francis showing Alfred and Arthur his powers and the toga scene and all of that xD this is probably like one of my favorite fanfictions, I just never remembered it's name! But yeah, I'm totally happy it's up again [:

cannot wait for the next chapter i absolutely adore this kinda plot playout with superheroes and ahh it's so cute o u o

Updates make my heart soar ;D

*pouts* Coooock-blooooock!

Haha. But the fluff was gold, and I love Arthur's wings. :)

(Oh, and I bet this is where you know me from, eh?)

Getting back from ALA and seeing that you've updated this? Amazing~!

I love how adorkable insecure they are, and all that jazz x3

Uhh, implied popular pairings? That just earned you more love!

I'm sorry I couldn't say more, but I am dead tired right now. I'll talk/read you later~!

nice story, hope you update soon:)

This is really good so far o_o. I seriously can't wait for more! XD Their relationship is so cute, I can't take it ewe!

Awesome. Well done on the relationship! I want more. The actions scenes are the part that read very awkwardly though. Actions scenes can be hard for descriptive writers to create. I know that sounds odd, but I often notice that writers like yourself, who shine at description and dialogue, get flummoxed over how to properly pull off an action scene. The reason being is that to keep up with the hyper-pace of an action scene you have cut back a lot on description and pick your words very carefully. Each one has to flow into the other all while revving up the pace. That's a big challenge for most, but especially for descriptive writers.

The only thing I could recommend that might help you improve your action scenes is that you try writing opposite your style. In other words, try being sparse on the details. Remember pacing and flow are more important than detail in A-scenes. Other than that, you write very well and I love how you protray our A and A heroes.

Oooh, this is very interesting. :D

*rude gesture at the man* (And now I wonder why he want Arthur for...)

Ohey my Anon name is there. (Sporks and Yoghurt)

Good continuation of the last chapter! But why did they leave Turky there? Did the police get him?

Questions that may be solved next chappie. :3

Good job! I've noticed consistent effort in the writing.

this is a really well written story, i've read many usuk fanfics about superheros and that kinda stuff but all of them weren't as good as this one! keep it up ;)