A very misogynistic story, if I ever saw one... the female characters are evil, sexual predators with no intelligence, ambition or love, except for Mrs Evans, the sterotypical church going sahm...
Severus is incredibly overpowered...a child genius who is always right, and has very odd conversations in his head...
Why does your Severus want Lily anyway? He doesn't like her...that is pretty clear, he doesn't lust after her...is it simply a matter of control?
Severus always goes to the exact worst interpretation of anything Lily says or does...that is going to make for a wonderful life...
The author shows writing skills, but the underlying emotional story is concerning. If you were one of my students, I would refer you to counseling.

terrible story

worse story ever

terrible - sookie write bad no polot

worse story ever

This Sookie is so over the top OOC that I can't read this story anymore ... she is vile.

I think this story is more like a comedy... The characters are soo far off the mark from anything I've ever seen on the show or read in any other fic.

this is stupid bill would kill sam

This got a good laugh out of me. It would be nice to see what happens to Sookie after Bills death and if the Queen sends someone else after her.

Oh, I'm so glad Bill got it hard (finally). This is a superb Sam voice, particularly late season 3. The story was direct and entertaining. Good work!

Loved the last line. This was sharp and sweet and perfectly fitting for Sam's character on the show now.

I am so glad you did this, so many times I wondered why Sam,Hoyt or one of the fairys didn't attempt this. Hoyt would know because of Jessica, Sam and fairys could smell him. Kudos to you for a Kill Bill!

This story was great. I really liked how Sam got his revenge on Bill.

:) I hope Sam stakes Bill.