Hi Foxfire : I have to agree with Bookworm about the italics. Cheers!

Yes, great story and the song caught the feeling of the moment. Not only Throttle's frustration but Carbines too, no bad guys just a bad situation that's going to leave somebody with a hurt heart.

Now I'm just waiting for "Invisible Ties" to show up, here.

Morning

I love the story, but I wish you had put the song lyrics in italics or bold so you could tell them apart from the story text.