Please continue! Your writing is very good. I do not think Advert and Legolas should have a "thing" but if you put that in I will keep reading anyway. I really want to know what will happen next!

Since you asked, I think that Legolas and Advert shouldn't have a thing. Maybe you could make up a female OC or something...

Hi, hobbittown,

I like this chapter best. I think you captured the emotions of Gimli, Advert, and the Elf-King (Thranduil?)very well.

I'll have to admit, the stringing-up thing in the last chapter caught me off-guard, but it just added to the suspense of the story. I'd tell you how to set up a warning, but I'm new here, and I'm not sure how either.

I like this story a lot, very suspenseful and cool! I'd keep writing, but I want to finish the story!

Yours,

Seryan Parks

This is great, not poop! You're so talented :) Please keep going! xx :)

This is brilliant! I love the characterisations. As for Advert, I think he and Legolas should have a little thing going on - that would be adorable :)

Well done :)

Oh my God! I didn't think the plot could thicken anymore but it has, you are a very talented writer - please write more for me! :)

You need to put a warning in your story.

A graphic chapter... wonderful! The detail was so minute I could picture it in my head. You are very talented - keep going! :) x

this is a very new and original topic. To be frank, i've never read any fanfics about this part of the timeline and it is a good try. keep it up and update soon!

I love the secret little talks that reveal parts of the characters subtley - a great idea. Well done.

A brilliant start, please write more so I can read it :)

You've got the relationship between Thranduil and Gimli spot on - it was very funny!