first, i gotta share that, for a moment, i thought Cassi's groom would be a potter hahaha it was a very pleasant surprise and, i think, more fitting to the story.

also, i have to say that, at the beginning, the story felt a bit awkward and lacking. i don't know how to properly explain, but, to be honest, something was missing, like, maybe you did not know where you wanted it go, as well as the fact that organization of the chapter was also very confusing.

i am glad i did not give up on it though. your writing improved a lot, as well as the plot and the whole story. draco and ginny interactions started being more natural and making more sense, for an instance. and when you started putting more about the outside world? it got even better.

overall, it was a very enjoyable experience and the chapter about their return to the wizarding world were very emotional. thank you for sharing it with us :)

Hmm. I want to like this story, I really do. Sadly, while the premise is reeking with potential, the actual execution in this story is lacking. There's no real flow that I can feel, and it doesn't feel very well thought out, I have no idea where this story is going and the interactions between Draco and Ginny just aren't compelling enough for me to want to go on. (I know that this was written years ago, but I can't help but critique this.)

At the very least I can say that My big fat Weasley Wedding (while Arthur is very ooc (and Harry to an extent (though his oocness feels well thought out and is interesting)) was very fun to read and was well executed. I can see that your writing is good, but something about this story feels lacking. Either way I hope you keep on writing, because, despite my negative review, I do believe that you are a good writer.

I struggled with this a little at the start yet am so look glad I persevered. Couldn't stop until I reach the end. Loved it !
Flowed well and characters fabulous. Fantastic insight into some of their challenges...all of them
Well done you!

YAY! HAPPY ENDING!

HARRY STILL SUCKS!

Ron is getting a little better. My baby just going through a lot. He will be fine.

I EFFING HATE HARRY POTTER!

Jesus Harry is grinding my gears.

SHE DOESNT WANT YOU, LET IT GO!

I don't like the healer. She seems power hungry. Glad Ginny snapped at her. I hate the way the Weasleys ate treating their own daughter. Tragic.

This story is very good BTW.

I love me some Blaise Zabini.

I'm hoping for a Pansy/George relationship even though I ship Hansy lol.

I hate Harry, I promise I do. Prat.

My Ron is scaring me. I don't like him being like this, but I do understand why.

And Hermione is being a b***h

Great fic! Congrats!

Wonderful story, it took me on an emotional roller coaster. Thanks for sharing it. Kudos.

I have now words I'm speechless! This is one of the most amazing mind grabbing diva I have ever read. I hope you continue to write and hope you get to read this review:) well I hope to read more stories from you soon