More please

Thank you! so good!

... hmmm Okay three things made me stop.
J. Rawling
Borrow grounds
Circus de Maguique

Then add the grammar, the hard to understand sentences and teeny tiny other small things.
Yeah... good luck

Too many characters introduced. Too many children. Malfoy-Weasley venture? All the kids out of the house? Teddy going to Hogwart already? Looks like a good story from the summary, but too confusing for me.

I love this fic. I love the story, the amazing ideas the guardians, the spider. It is cool and crazy. However it is difficult to follow and to read occasionally which means I'm talking some breaks at times. I always come back, cause it has stuck to my head, always. For instance, I still don't understand what shewolf was smelled, who it was or what about it in the post fighting scene. That was confusing.

I still love the story, the wild imagination, so unlike any I've read before and original.

I read that you might remove some stories and is rushing too finish this, at chapter 25. Good job and wow what a story!

I tried to read this...hell I got all the way to chapter 17. I think the bones are pretty good but there was a lot of grammar mistakes and the way everyone was acting was very odd. I skipped to the end because I just wanted to see how it ended...and again it was very strange. Different. So that's a good thing...its a very unique story.

You had me at 'Cuban salsa group'. This story is amazing. The beginning scenes with Bill, Hermione and the creepy sniffing reminded me of the intro to 'You took the words right out of my mouth' by Meatloaf. I love your take on the wolves, especially with the inner wolf being a separate consciousnesses. The best was what you did with Fred and Sirius and everyone having a happy ending. The other world and other selves was beautiful and so handy to have all those extra beings watching out. My favourite character was the Aunt spider, everyone could easily squish her, but she was the boss.

this is retarded

what the fuck is going on?

This was a great story. I haven't read anything quit like it lol. I really love how you brought Sirius,Reg, and Robert back.

I loved this I wish you would continue it but I understand it would be a never ending story:)

Unique plot, fab characters, thank you, looking forward to reading more of your work..

Loved it.

Screw not being able to do this I love this!

I just found this story please don't remove it yet! I forgot my log in to my account, but I'm have wrote a few stories