Very moving chapter. Great emotions here. Too bad Carson never got the closure he deserved. Awesome job. Looking forward to more from you.

Well done. Great insight into that last letter. Hope to see more of your work...;-)

An excellent look into what Clone Carson must have been thinking before going into stasis. I like how you bring up the realization that, while he's not the original, he can still do something for his mother. That he can write the letter the other Carson didn't get a chance to write.

Well done. ;-)

Wow. . . .I'm not entirely sure what to say to this one. I believe it would take a situation like this for Rodney to start thinking about God, but I don't know that he'd go THIS far.

Good writing, but definitely not my cup of tea for this chapter.

Sending review by PM...;-)

this was wonderful.. you wrote rodney with such depth.. I just never see that in him.. well done.

Amazing chapter. Great insight into Rodney during what had to be a dark time for him.

Ouch. I love the way you have woven the story in such a way that all in your story have not only had the opportunity to come to Jesus, but have. Atlantis saved, a pleasent thought to be sure. Great job with who is probably my favorite character on the show.

How do I review...It only the our loved ones who have known the way could remember he grace, even if it takes a "death-bed" experience. I especially liked Ford's piece, well done.

And which of us on this journey hasn't taken the time to ask why me? Wow...;-)

Great visual. Anyone who has served and been behind enemy lines would be able to relate. Good work...;-)

Very well written. It would seem only natural to get a very strong spiritual woman, like Teyla, the opportunity to know Jesus like we do. From a Biblical stand-point, there is nothing better than a heart felt "Hallelujah", but I do understand your point of view. I'm looking forward to the next chapters.

I love the last line of the story: I will bring you Home. It is that promise that keeps many of us going through those hard days. This isn't the end, it's just a pitstop along the road to our destination as believers. This was a beautiful representation of that, as John struggled to accept what happened in the episode "Doppleganger." I really enjoyed it. Great work!

these are wonderful.. all of these, what a great idea.

Another moving chapter. Great job.