This looks interesting...

ohh I would have killed Marcie too bad im not nora

Crying my eyes out.

Complicated by Avril Larvigne
Wow Nora you completely forgot about Elliot. Ugh life is so hard. I don't want Elliot's heart to be broken but at the same time I want Nora and Patch to get back together. Why did you make things so complicated Bianca Roz? WHY!?
P.S. love this story.

Im having that special moment a reader experiences when he or she wants to hop into an story and beat the hell out of a fictional character. :)

God your making it so hard for me. Idk who to ship. NoraPat or NoraEill? Both are do hot right now. Why are you doing this to me.

I absolutely love your taste of music.

Great job. I truly enjoyed this story, and each character. You did an excellent job with story flow, painting a picture, conversations between characters, and providing a fantastic story line. In other words: you are an amazing writer. Thank you for taking the time to write this! I look forward to reading your published work.

Beautiful chapter. I really like the changes you made to the story.

I like that they glow. Nice touch. It would be cool if all good detectives had wings and powers ;).

Oh wow. Great great stuff.

OK... Wow

WHAT?

Not confused. Fascinated.

You have described a fascinating scene. I wish I could see it. Maybe you should be a screen writer! (In addition to an author)