Gah. This is fantastic.
You have captured his emotions perfectly, and this is exactly how I think he would have felt and it's perfect.
Well done.

I really enjoyed the begging of the fic when Jonathan talked about Jocelyn. And the end was a little bit different, *applauds for very solid effort.

We didn't see Valentine as much as we could have but i loved this just as much without him. You portrayed Jonathan so well. :)

Wow. This was amazing.

I love, love, LOVE your portrayal of Jonathan. It's perfect. And your Valentine is amazing too. :) It was so well written, and I truly enjoyed reading it.

The best Mortal Instruments fic I've read so far.

that was soooo good! no, not good. AMAZING. :)

keep writing,

-AnnetheV

Fantastic story. I enjoyed your portrayal of Jonathan but I'm a little curious now on what happens next. Great job.

Wow. That was incredible. I thought you captured Sebastion's character perfectly. I can see how much work went in to creating this. Wonderful.

Okay, so I think I'm going to write the shortest review and say this was awesome. It is probably now one of my favorite

MI fanfics. *thumbs up.*

This was perfect. In every meaning and form of perfect that you can describe in literature.

I loved the ending to part seven and three. They show Jonathan for who he really is. Especially the wanting part. I think that it describes him perfectly.

His views of Clary is spot on. Just what it probably would be if they showed it from his POV in the book.

All in all. It was fantastic.

Thank you.

- Draco Ghost

Really beautiful, Ju.

Like, broken-glass-you-know-it's-dangerous-but-it's-still-gorgeous type beautiful.

I've never liked Jonathan, but this is kind of a nice insight into his head and why he was he way he was and who he was and just everything that isn't said in the books.

Noelle

8DDDDDDDDDDDDD

Hey, Jules, is that okay if that's all I have to say right now? :)

Anyway, fr srs, I loved it. It was so thought-out and put-together and Sebastian-y. 0D

You're epic, and this fic matches that so.

Thanks, much.

Rachel