Oh no, you messed with Wado...

First i was not sure if i liked this story, but now i've decided that i love it!
I have never read Male pregnancy fics before but this one is kinda cute. I'm gonna read the whole thing!
First i tought that it might be Luffy who was pregnant, but i'm glad its Zoro!
Heh, Luffy-san should be proud! He's 19 and a father!
Good job Luffy!
Og and you are great at writing by the way!
Much better than 90% of the shit people write here! Great story, good plot!
Love it!
Sincerely The One Piece Virus

I love this story and both endings! I prefer thealternate cause there is the sequl which i also love

Agh the bitch

Another book of yours i have read countless times! And i was pregnant the first time too. I know it gets really dark later but the first chapter always makes me laugh

To be honest there is nothing I can say right now besides I think you're the most amazing writer and I am eternally grateful to have stumbled upon your profile in tumblr and ended up here. You are bloody awesome.

wow... ok are you studying to become a doctor or something because your knowledge on this is just amazing!

Nice story loved it from the start to end! LOVE IT!

The last few chapters were an intense ride. I loved them. I feel almost cheated to read the happy ending now

I read the whole fic. and I loved it so much!
I laughed, cried, felt hurt, angry and scared, all of it. And that's what makes for an awesome story.

Altough I felt better reading the alternate ending, I have kids myself and I'm sensitive about those things, you are right by saying that the original ending fits the story better.

The last I will say is that this story turned me in to a fan of your wrighting.

XD

Okay, I- I have so many things to tell, about your story and Im hearing crossfire right now and I kind of don’t know if I want to cry or laugh –you give me feelings, way too many of them and they are all mixed up perhaps because of the way you did two endings-

Anyway I, I love Luffi/Zero paring more than any other and I prefer Luzo over Zulo but well not many people write it like that, until now –the way you portrayed their personalities was very IC and it was all the more heartbreaking for that-

Halfway the story I got the feeling of it not getting any better any time soon and yet I couldn’t stop reading, now let me tell you I have read –many stories of many fandoms and of many themes, sometimes very Dark in a mind-fucking way, I guess, I’m also not strange to m-preg with torture or rape… yes I have read that much and yet it was my first time reading a woman in the roll of the tormentor and it was fucking scary man, I admit it, it disturbed me a bit because she raped him as in every way there could have been, even his mind… (I started the crossfire drabbles today too and the part Zoro says he is afraid he killed two sons, wow… I just cant)

For that I’m happy Luffy destroyed impel down completely, also Zoro killing her, I really thought it was going to be Luffy the one to do it, but it was a good surprise nonetheless.

Now touching other subjects, the first ending broke me, when Ussop gave Luffy the little wood sword and when he finally killed the marine and screamed to Ace –both of them- that he had done it, that was it, it was just so sad… in its own way it was beautiful. I also felt sorry for Zoro because after all he did –and ironically the marines did to him to get Dragons attention- to protect the child was for nothing, it was a very smart plot, well thought out.

Also I would prize Sanji because he was the only one who I noticed didn’t really lost it and of course Trafalgar, he has my respect.

Overall ending 1, it hurt but it was worth it, really worth it also you are a very talented writer.

Now with ending 2, it also made me want to cry but for all different reasons, I also laughed then…I’ll go keep reading all of your works now. Amazing.

Thanks for writing all of this.

Just a reminder, Law usually uses the honorific -ya

Never mind, I saw the alternate ending and am happy :) yay for alternate endings!

I don't like it...3':
I'm a sucker for non cheesey happy endings. I love your writing skills and I love lemons but missing fingers and a lost baby? Sucks poo D: D: i'm not saying you're a bad writer I just can't stand the sadness

Freaking amazing. The story was freaking amazing! I liked both endings but the first one follows the story more. I was waiting on a little bit more on the other ending such as what happens next and how they cope with it.
I love the story!