Love it. I totally love it.

Oh, God! This is so des pressing and hard to understand
'Then I could felt some thoughts whispered inside my head'
Shouldn't it be
'Then I could hear some thoughts whispered inside my head'
And the pov changing! God!
But still, I couldn't stop! Even thou I know this is sad and depressing! I could not get enough of it! I just want to see the ending! I want to see Kaito regretting what he did and Miku happy!
So update, please!

great story. Keep up the good work!

Thank you for still writing this fanfiction. When i first read it, i thought that you'll be not writing it anymore. But, i'm very happy to see you are back. Thanks for making this awesome fanfiction.

It is not a bad story, but the English is kinda choppy, you might want to get a beta reader to help with it :) otherwise, good job!
God bless!
-Simone

I really love the story so far. I remember reading this a while back, but I never did review, so here I am. I have to say, this story is so dark and poetic. I love it. I’ve never read anything like this before. Can’t wait to finish the rest of the chapters.

Wow. This is really cool. I'm definetly going to read more.

Really good story, but kind of confusing.

WHAT WAIT?! WHY DO THEY WANT TO BULLY HER? WHYYYYY? MIKU IS AMAZING! But I love your KaitoxMiku, but I have a feeling somethign bad is goign to happen, and Kaito is going to break up with Miku (sobsob)

From a very hurtful pain on my chest to back, into something like this. It's so fluffy... X3

But it will change soon, right? Because there is no true happiness in this world.

Dell... If I know this sooner... I will never say that to you... I am now feel like them now. Like the STUPID Kaito.

I hate you... Kaito... Because you didn't trust Miku... And because you hurt Dell, your best friend without a feelings. If you are a human and you think your sufferness is same like them, you are truly mistaken.

I wish...
you will DIE...
with full SUFFERNESS...

Rin... Fucking Rin. I WOULD NEVER THOUGH YOU DARE TO DO THAT! IT'S HURT! It's hurt SO MUCH! WHY CAN'T YOU UNDERSTAND!

And Kaito... Kaito... You... Why... I...

Human... Is a stupid being.

Weird. Why would he wants to become a shadow?
UPDATE! XD

...Would someone give a food to Kaito? Uh... D*mn. I can't do that no matter how I try.

Miku! Please wake up! Just once! Let's stop this hatred between you and Kaito with you awake. There's no words of too late. At least when you're still alive. If you still alive, you still can change everything, Miku. Or! Or add a new beautiful flower painting on your canvas! It must be help you! Because canvas was your life, brush is the one that draw your life, and you are the artist. c:

Len?! LEN?! THAT FUCKING LEN?! (but he appearence was like Dell. At least here).

Why? WHY HE HAS TO BE THAT LEN?! WHY THAT FUCKING D*MN JERK HAVE TO BE LEN?! HE SAID HE DIDN'T WANT TO BECOME MIKU BFF, HE STAB MIKU, AND NOW HE EVEN DIDN'T SYMPATHY AT ALL?! DON'T SAYING LIKE YOU CARE ABOUT HER! YOU ONLY THINK ABOUT YOURSELF! At least Miku wants a friend! But him? What does he even want from this world? Give me a reason!

Sorry, I just imagine if Len was totally live in this world. And I feel really idiot for do this. -_-"

I'm sorry for everything... Please continue this story. I'll do everything to hold this fear and pain to read this story. This story... Was written by the Fallen Angel. This story is dark. This story could break a human into a little pieces because pain and the truth, because human stupidness... Because you fear yourself. I never like a story that end up have no happy ending. This story but also the light. It makes you believe you are not alone. You have friend. You have yourself. You have to chase the light. No matter how painful it was. There's a morality that I can't explain with words. I have forget the light and remember the darknep more. I'm sorry... This kind of story... It brokes me but it also heal me. I can't wish anything except for you continue this story. I'll do everything for you if you want to continue. I will even broke myself if you would like to continue. And for repay... Maybe... I want to make a happy ending version for this story. Not totally the same, just the concept. Please? I don't want to see sad end story that healing.. I want a happy end that broken and healing at the same time..

*cry* yu touched this heart. Thumbs up!