Nice idea and interesting start!

Can Mel remember watching the Underworld movies and decide that Selene's outfit is better when fighting...

Like a latex version of Liquid Armor.

This has been a quite interesting story so far. I like the way your character integrates into soul society... or maybe doesn't integrate. It would be interesting to see where this is going.

I hope you'll continue this story sometime. Thank you for writing,
Beyogi

Why Futhark of all scripts? As far as I know Latin script is actually older.

Anyway, this story get exciting. Thank you for writing,
Beyogi

I Love, I Like, I Lust!Please Update Soon!

I love your take on the bleach world, espescially how you made it more real and less like a shonen manga. Your OC is great and her observations and insights really make it come alive.

Excellent fic, can't wait for more.

Great story. I hope you update soon. Happy New Year.

Thought I'd reviewed this already, but on a re-read apparently not. Technically well written, as all your work is, and I enjoyed what you've done with your OC. There's a fair bit of potential for exploration of areas not really covered by the canon material, such as the machinations of the great clans and aristocracy of Seireitei, and the mechanics of the Demon Arts. I look forward to where you go with this, and seeing the various aspects of the story develop with the next chapter. Offhand, I can't recall anyone trying the technology enhancement route in Soul Society before, and as an engineer I am always fascinated by the details of such efforts. I eagerly await the next chapter of this or any of your stories, whenever the muse cooperates, nice work!

interesting change of events.

I love her views on kido and how she going to go about them its the best way in my option.

I like her inner world vary much.

I wonder who her visiter is is she a canon Soul reaper

I had the idea that she would find Rangiku instead of Gin . they would probably get along great and Rangiku would probably not be a drunk.

IMHO the part where your character goes on far too long. But nonetheless your story is original and your narrator seems almost real (if a little strange, what with going around naked in the house of your host).

Im a quite eager to see the shikai, doese it allow the wielder to know all the sins of the ennemy? With knowing everything about what the sword touch and the spirit is strangely reminiscent of Eve.

Will Melanie be part of the 12th division under Urahara?

Interesting. This guest promises to provide some excellent twists.

I eagerly await to see how things proceed. Keep at it!

Cool chapter, plot moves and thickens. Mel's Soul Slayer seems to embody Death in some ways, 4 moons. 4 is death in Eastern cultures. Though since she's a western blade this remains to be seen, hmmm... More please, love your writing. Your muse produces, my curiosity consumes.

nice

s simple look on bleach wiki show Kisuke Urahara is a great deal older then how you have it here so with that good day to you

its supposed to take hundreds of years to reach bankai and 10 years of training afterwards to master it, atleast according to byakuya. thats not counting hitsugaya, ichigo, and kisuke