The fuck?! Where is the ending?!

AWESOME story, really really LOVE it!
You have great story telling skills :-)

paullllll freaking wesley?! i love him!

that reminds me of klaus and hayley's fight when she kept screamingfight back

aww sammy! it was going so well until you fainted0:!

me thinking the salvation is cas!(;

I cant follow anymore john is always paved as this horrible uncaring person when his not yet san can treay dean like crap and no body gives a shit about that

I hate sam deab practically raised the asshole and he treats him like crap for it!

Really dislike how job treats him in this his not the best father but he loves his boys and would NEVER tell dean to fix "his" grandchild and out hunting first above his kid because deep down he knows what putting hunting furst did to his own kids.

Sam i can see treating dean like that he always underestimated and underaprecated when it came to Sam treating dean like crap

THIS IS THE FUCKING MOST ADORABLE DEAN DAUGHTER FIC I HAVE EVER READ! YOU ARE GIVING ME SOOOOOOO MANY FEELS!

I loved the inclusion of “driver picks the music shotgun shuts his cakehole” it made my heart all warm and fuzzy! Especially after tearing up during the fight between dean and Rayan! Your writing is phenomenal!

This chapter was absolutely beautiful! It was unexpected and really great! I also like the fact that she said “we are hunters” and Dean didn’t seem to notice that! Can’t wait to see what happens next!

I don't care that I've got 18 more chapters to go. DAMN! Ch 41 is SO emotional...literally crying. I feel so bad for Rayan...and Dean.

Every time I read the name Rayan, my brain wants to read CRAYON. So basically, Dean's kid is going to be Crayon from now on. Well done.

NEGATIVE
Rayan? Sounds too masculine for a baby girl and its also a very unfortunate name. It's a good think this kid is only fictional. Still...seriously? Really great chapter, but the name is just awful. I'm not a big fan of these types of names. Rayan, Rain, Rayna, Rian, etc...bleh. Whatever the name, they're all pretty much the d mn same to me. No matter how they're spelt or pronounced, they all just sound so...tacky, and overdone when it comes to OCs. They're all such typical OC sounding, that it's really cringeworthy. I just don't get why people like this names is darned much. Elizabeth is incredibly common but really pretty. I'm a little biased, since it's my niece's middle name, but still...Why didn't you just go with that? For a baby girl, Elizabeth is so lovely and so much more universally adaptable to a character, then Rayan.

SEMI-POSITIVE
Anyways...Sorry for the criticism. It's kind of uncalled for, I know, but it triggered me enough that I just had to say something. Even if it was a negative thing to comment on. Apart from that, though, the first two chapters were great, and I'm looking forward to seeing what happens next, and hopefully finishing the rest of the fic. I'm going to try my damndest to get over the name choice, but since I'm HUGE on etymology and choosing the right names for the right characters, I'm honestly not sure if I can choke it down. I WILL TRY, though, because I love daddy!Dean fics with a passion.