I was finding this interesting and am disappointed that it was never finished. Maybe someday you'll be inspired to write more?

Hey, I hope you are still going to update soon! This is great so far.

Love the story! I really hope that you do come back to this story cause it is great!

Good luck and best wishes for the problems in the "real world". Would love to read more of your writing. LA

i really like this story so far. and eliot really needs to bash in some heads. hope things are better for you now! and when they are, hopefully you'll continue this story :)

I really love this story so far. I am sorry that things aren't going well for you now. I will be waiting here for you to continue when things get better.

"Her logic was as twisted as curly fries." That cracked me up.

Love this store so far, I like the way you've portrayed Parker. Hope things are alright with you, thanks for the awesomevread.

Thank you letting me know. I like this story. You are a very good writer. I hope everything works out for you. Can't wait to read more

I love this story and cant wait for more x i hope everything thats going on is gone soon x

hope everything turns out ok

Bummer! I hope everything turns out well for you. We will be waiting when you are ready to return. :)

I hope that if it's troubles you are having they are quickly gone, and that all worries, and pains leave you.

Write soon, please. I'll miss you.

Mercedes

Ok. We need more! Soon!

Great story! Please update!