Oh I like it! I hope there is more to come? I just watched ep 13 and it was just "FINALLY!". Looking forward to more :)

LOVED IT! Please write more!

I like it. My favorite part was (don't hunt me down when I say this) was Ryan and Esposito "Not sure what to make of what jsu transpired". I know most people think that Castle and Beckett is the single most impotant part of the show but I STRONGLY disagree. The show would tank just as badly without Ryan Esposito there making fun of them and placing bets. Same goes for Lanie and the Captain but not as heavily. Its like Castle and Beckett are the foundation of the house and Ryan & Eposito are the supports. Anyway back to your story. I like how you incorporated a lot of the sexy talkj, but with enough fluff and humor mixed in it wasn't just one big racy pile of words. I love your analogies, cats watching Ping Pong, etc. You have a good literary talent.

Please keep going. it's so cute!