awww :) so cute!

LOL. I would loved to have seen this in Nate's POV.

You should write more! Change it from a one-shot to a story.

This is me taking two seconds to give you a well deserved review.

GREAT job! I think you wrote this wonderfully! The way you worded, captured the emotions and expressions of everyone was so well done. It's been a long time since I've read a oneshot as well done as this.

Thank you for writing this Naitlyn oneshot, it was very cute. It reminded me of "Speak Now" by Taylor Swift so much that I have a feeling you may have based it on it. Maybe not. I'm just a little in love with her album, so maybe that's me. xD

Anyways, sorry this got so wordy. O.O I think I spent more than two seconds on this review. Oh, well. Hope it makes you smile.

Well done! Keep writing! :D

loved it as always :)

That made me feel all happy inside...

x

Ah really sweet- loved it!

Tacxxx

Love the story. Love the plot. And it's exactly what I'm looking for. Sometimes I wish it's Shane and Mitchie but honey u got Talent. Ever since Mitchie Unrevealed, I knew you make it to the big shot and I'm proud of you. Keep up the good work, maybe make a sequel. Suprendous (super tremendous)! My rating: * * * * * five stars out of five stars!

I totally agree with Shane and Mitchie. COMPLETELY HILARIOUS. Awesome story. :)

I am not the kind of girl

Who should be rudely barging in on a white veil occasion

But you are not the kind of boy

Who should be marrying the wrong girl

I sneak in and see your friends, and her snotty little family

All dressed in pastel

And she is yelling at a bridesmaid, somewhere back inside a room

Wearing a gown shaped like a pastry

This is surely not what you thought it would be

I lose myself in a daydream where I stand and say

Don’t say yes, run away now

I’ll meet you when you’re out of the church at the backdoor

Don’t wait or say a single vow

You need to hear me out and they said speak now

Fond gestures are exchanged

And the organ starts to play a song that sounds like a death march

And I am hiding in the curtains

It seems that I was uninvited by your lovely bride-to-be

She floats down the aisle like a pageant queen

But I know you wish it was me, you wish it was me

Don’t you?

Don’t say yes, run away now

I’ll meet you when you’re out of the church at the backdoor

Don’t wait or say a single vow

You need to hear me out and they said speak now

So don’t say yes, run away now

I’ll meet you when you’re out of the church at the backdoor

Don’t wait or say a single vow

Your time is running out and they said speak now

I hear the preacher say speak now or forever hold your peace

There’s the silence, there’s my last chance

I stand up with shaking hands, all eyes on me

Horrified looks from everyone in the room

But I’m only looking at you

I am not the kind of girl

Who should be rudely barging in on a white veil occasion

But you are not the kind of boy

Who should be marrying the wrong girl

Don’t say yes, run away now

I’ll meet you when you’re out of the church at the backdoor

Don’t wait or say a single vow

You need to hear me out and they said speak now

And you say lets run away now

I’ll meet when I’m out of my tux at the backdoor

Baby I didn’t say my vows, so glad you were around

When they said ‘Speak now’

BY FAR THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ FROM YOU SPWARKLE.

UMM, YOU HAVE GO TO BE KIDDING ME? YOU ARE ALREADY COUNTING DOWN TO FREAKING SANTA? ONLY YOU HOL-I MEAN SPWARLKLE.

YOU HAVE 30-40 ALERTS TO YOUR STROIES I AM BY FAR JEALOUSE. I HAVE 14 MINIMUM. WELL YOU ARE A BETTER WRITER THAN ME SO...

ANYWAYS, SORRY FOR THE CAPLOCKS I AM HAVING A FUN TIME, HOME ALONE ON MY LAPTOP. WELL CONSIDERING I HAVE BEEN ON MY STUPID PHONE ALL DAY CHATTING TO YOU ON THE TINY KEYBOARD. I AM MAKING USE OF THIS AWESOME HUGE KEYBORAD WITH EIGHTY-TWO KEYS ON IT. :P

I KNOW IT'S LONG BUT I WAS HAVING FUN! DON'T JUDGE ME, I AM BORED OKAY. BASED OFF MY PROFILE PICTURE ON FACEBOOK YOU CAN TELL. AND I SLEPT TOO MUCH TODAY LIKE YOU THAT I CAN'T SLEEP KNOW. EVEN THOUGH I AM BABYSITTING PEYTON. BLAH.

AND SHE REFUSES TO SLEEP AND STAYS IN THE CORNER FOR LIKE AN HOUR AT A TIME.

ANYWAYS, I WILL TALK TO YOU TOMORROW. MAYBE WE WILL BOTH BE SICK AGAIN. OR LIKE ME, HAVE A SNOWDAY. WHICH IS VERY UNLIKELY FOR SOMEONE WHO HAD SPRING COMING VERY FAST.

ANYWAYS I SHOULD STOP BLABING KNOW. CAUSE YOU PROBALLY DON'T WANT TO READ IT. BUT I DID WASTE YOUR TIME DIDN'T I? LOL GM WORTHY