I'm sorry but uhhhhh die hogyokou can't give a shinigami a hollow that's sentient and his mom really like wtf.

This doesn't PROVE anything. Ruling someone as a plausible suspect doesn't make them the culprit. You still have to PROVE that. Basic burden of proof. Do you think the cops automatically arrest a guy if hes the only suspect? No. Because you could be unaware of another possible culprit.

Oh my god, Masaki is fucking hilarious... You are a good writer

Well Done with this chapter! This is one of the best stories I've ever read. This chapter stirred up alot of happy feelings. When I first began reading this I didn't expect things to be this good!

The writting in this...just can't get enough

This chapter blew my mind. I didn't see much of this coming.

Outstanding chapter man. Im at the edge of my seat reading this. The relationship development is golden once again.

The build up of the relationshop is awesome. Im impressed with what you have done with this AU so far.

Whelp that escalated. Maybe Cirucci will get a happy ending at some point.

What a piece of shit what happened you started good

The story started OK 0but now it is shit why is ichigo so weak

I gotta say, I love this story. Starting from 2 days ago when I discovered the story to now, reading the story has been a journey, and personally this is one of the best bleach journeys I have embarked on! The romance aspect of this fic for me is the shining gem atop the crown, I just love it! The chemistry between Shaolin, Ichigo and Senna is just wonderful to read, so while other fics might be better in the action aspect of the story, the emotional part of this story just shines through and elevates this to one of the top stories for bleach in my opinion. Since I discovered this fic recently I don't know how long the usual update time is, but I can definitely say I am eagerly awaiting the next chapter! Well done!

This shit just got fucking meta with the talk of higher powers oml

Glad to see another chapter. Most of it was great, with only two real complaints:

The final performance by Ichigo, Senna, Sui-Feng, Cirucci, and Unohana was... well, there's no suspension of disbelief with that. They just wouldn't do that. Ichigo especially. It was bizarre (and difficult) to read that part. How would anyone be able to act at a performance level without practicing the choreography anyway? I just don't see it happening, ever.

Characterization over drama; not the other way around. I think a more emotional piece, perhaps a duet, by Ichigo and Senna (since Sui-Feng literally said she didn't want to be seen on stage while pregnant before the previous songs) would have felt plausible, since they had already sang before. Something that hints at their relationship, since that seems to be the theme: connecting lyrics to something relevant to them that's hidden in plain sight.

Kisuke was played way too much for laughs, as he was turned into a caricature for the most part. A lot of parts just didn't feel like his actual character. Take the gold fish: He would have understood the trick, realized the game was rigged, and sneakily cheated. He lost his intelligence to play the part of Keigo Asano.

Yoruichi was a little too obsessed with goldfish, but otherwise fine. I'm only mentioning her in comparison because Kisuke was completely unrecognizable.

As an observation: I noticed a lot of extremes were used when they didn't quite fit. Like adding "successfully" to Unohana sealing her zanpakuto like there was a chance of failure (when there isn't). I don't know if that was your intention, so I'm just letting you know that there was a lot of similar stuff, in case it wasn't.

Ciruicci's misunderstandings were a funny highlight, and done pretty well.

I enjoyed most of it; thanks for the chapter.
Have a good month(s) and God bless,
SomethingAncient

Oh, and some advice on punctuation around dialogue:
Commas should be used instead of periods if the sentence doesn't end with the dialogue; even if the dialogue's sentence has ended. Example:

"I don't get it, you said I was done when I cleaned my room. This isn't fair," she said.

Also, when interrupting dialogue with narration:

"I don't get it," she said, "you said I was done when I cleaned my room." She crossed her arms and huffed. "This isn't fair."

Use periods if you aren't describing speech, like above. "She crossed her arms and huffed" is an action, and not speech description, so there are periods.

If you need to split dialogue with an action, use the em dash (I'll use a double dash to represent that, because it's hard to get a real em dash on mobile):

"I don't get it"-she stared him down, despite looking up at him-"you said I was done when I cleaned my room."

Notice I didn't combine the em dashes with commas.

However, if you describe dialogue, and attach an action to it, it's fine to use commas, like so:

"I don't get it," she said, staring him down despite the fact she was shorter, "you said I was done when I cleaned my room."

I hope that helps.

Im honestly surprised that Subaru and sojiro didn't simply kill themselves to avoid torture, that seems like the smart way of doing things tbh