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   amber.dyce chapter 1 . 7/3 wow that was a powerful first chapter... I have never stumbled across your stories before and plan to read them all. |
| Emo4 chapter 46 . 6/17 I really like this story. thanks for sharing. did you write a sequel? I'll have to look. |
| Mari Wollsch chapter 46 . 5/26 lovely xxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx |
| Lemonmelons chapter 36 . 5/25 Oh thanks! Already I enjoyed this story a lot because Bella is badass. Thanks even more for letting char and Bella rescue the guys! |
| clickpic chapter 15 . 5/3 Edward is an idiot! |
| sohelpmegod chapter 46 . 1/19 this is probably my fifth read of this, and every time it is still fucking amazing. please write more of these jasper/bella stories with the major aspect as well. phenomenal, well written, and truly a pleasure to read, each and every time :) |
| celajwhitney chapter 15 . 10/31/2019 edward has always been a pompous prick, hasn't he? |
| celajwhitney chapter 10 . 10/31/2019 stupid punk edward. |
| Guest chapter 46 . 9/12/2019 Loved this story. Thank you for writing it. |
| 8IOwnTheNight8 chapter 46 . 8/3/2019 That was beautiful. I love what you did at the end. This is why I think stories need epilogues. (just saying) Yours was great. |
| d chapter 46 . 6/8/2019 Love ur writing! and especially the Major *.* I hope you write more of this persona in 2019! the whole clark kent part is actually my favorite thing ever, J being so much stronger than Emmett and faster than Edward but no one knowing unfff |
| puzzl chapter 46 . 6/8/2019 Sooo I think this is my 4th time reading this fic, its one of those that i come back to every few years and it is always as good as I remembered 3 my favorite j/b fic ever written, I absolutely adore you! And i do remember having a nice good cry at the end of this fic the first time I read it haha now I can read it and just fully appreciate the emotional fucking you provided for all of us! |
| Guest chapter 1 . 4/30/2019 don't forget that bella is also, annoying, clingy, pathetic, and desparate! |
| eeveejacob chapter 34 . 4/28/2019 In Rio, as in Brazil as a whole, the language spoken is Portuguese, not Spanish. It's extremely annoying when people think we speak Spanish and when they unknowingly spread this misconception. A random person won't pick up a phone and start speaking Spanish. (It would be, for example: "Alô?" or "Sim, olá?" or even "Pronto?";And Alice, would be Alice, just with a different A sound.) This topic aside, I'm loving to read this story and the plot. I was not reviewing 'cause I was in that fic frenzy, "I gotta read it all asap, next, next, next" |
| Raven J. Haile chapter 46 . 3/13/2019 I loved this. I am so happy I read it. :3 |
