Reviews for Moon Born Children
KURAMAX chapter 10 . 6/23/2018
I don't have any fucking idea WTF was just happen & tf is Giles planning...
Planning for naruto to get pregnant & have puppies? U gotta be shiting me...
& what's been bothering me is IDK when will the pov change...which is why I don't know who tf is moro the moon goddess ; what is she? & where/what kind of world/dimension is she living?

I'm sorry if I sounded harsh. I'm just still haven't used to mpreg fanfic yet T-T
TigerDemonOwnz chapter 16 . 4/15/2011
so this is going to be the last one
I.Walk.Threw.Walls chapter 16 . 4/15/2011
The last chapter... I'm kinda sad its finished. But your right. All stories must have there endings _ Great last chapter btw _
roboguy45 chapter 16 . 4/15/2011
Enjoy it no i love this story, i love the way you let Giles live on in Naruto and Sasuke's baby. I bet it was so cute.
roboguy45 chapter 15 . 4/11/2011
LOL i mean it LOL i know that he had a human form LOL.
I.Walk.Threw.Walls chapter 15 . 4/11/2011
Wow. I did not see that one coming. You are just full of surprises aren't you! That was an awesome chapter, you must must must must must must update soon!
VaerinFox chapter 15 . 4/11/2011
Your story seriously keeps me on the edge of my seat every time! Love it! Update soon!
TigerDemonOwnz chapter 15 . 4/11/2011
Whoa let it begin
Rawr chapter 4 . 4/8/2011
Dude the story is cool. But you keep spelling couch wrong :P FYI umm its with U not an A.. 'coach' is a fancy car.
I.Walk.Threw.Walls chapter 14 . 4/8/2011
YOu story just got a few hundred times more intense. Update. Soon.
TigerDemonOwnz chapter 14 . 4/8/2011
Mm my let's see what else
I.Walk.Threw.Walls chapter 13 . 4/1/2011
Wow great chapter, Slightly scary but still great. Update soon!
roboguy45 chapter 13 . 4/1/2011
Atleast that groos man is gone LOL.
VaerinFox chapter 12 . 3/30/2011
Yeah, that made my stomach turn over.
Anime-girl-next-door chapter 12 . 3/28/2011
Ok this story is pure genius

I find it original, your plot is very good and the whole way you make the pairings come together really is good. Also your writing is lovely and I really think you have talent, can't wait for the next update
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