Yes its good to end on a high note. however by the same token this is not a book with a Paige count or film or TV show with limited time. This is a fan fiction. I like it more when the good heart warming chapters equal the angst ones. Most stories focus so heavily on drama and their getting together they fail to give us any happy moment's that are not angst driven.

I really hope we see her in parents room lol

Nice story so far. I read your a/n and I am glad u dislike Finn cause he is the 3rd most dispeciable guy in the show only puck and the drug dealing former teacher are worse. Though I do have one issue you have made Quinn over the top mean to rachel. But Quinn in first season for example only posted on Rachel's web videos with meanness. Other than that everything she did was in response to Rachel trying to steal her man. Heck Quinn only was ever mean to puck Finn and Rachel! So yeah not really happy with evil Quinn its just not her.

I could say a lot of things about this story but I think it would never end. I really loved it, I think it's one of the best stories I ever read. The plot is very good and is correctly written. I love how you describe all the characters. I do not usually comment between chapters, I always read the whole story and make a review at the end and I can say that this has been a great story. So, excellent work. ️

I can’t believe it took me 7 or 8 read throughs to finally realise that they’re watching I am Number 4! I’m glad you didn’t put in something about Sarah looking like Quinn thoughcould have been a little too meta

God. This chapter made realize why i love faberry so much. Their dynamic is interesting and unique. Nobody could understand the depth of Quinn’s utter loneliness and despair but Rachel since she’s like Beth in a sense, but not quite the same because unlike Quinn, Shelby gave up on her daughter long before she even carried her, which probably made Rachel struggle and feel as lonely as Quinn felt if not more. ):

OH MY GOD. I've finally read this one after have it saved for so long and i regret it I'm actually mad at myself for not giving it a try sooner. This was such a ride they're the most adorable couple ever. Thank you

Amazing, fun story. It was an enjoyable read all over again. Thanks!

Oh honey, trust me you're really good at writing sexy times.. totally turned on right now, sorry if that's TMI :) Nothing crass or gross, all very naturally flowing and suggestive.. loved it! Just like I generally love your writing, I never once felt like it was forced or, I don't know, stilted, like it sonetimes happened with some stories.. Great job!

If this is truly your first story then you are amazingly gifted.

Please continue to write as the pleasure you have provided is immeasurable.

Perfect!

Oh good god you got me laughing my ass of on that mirror scene, haven't laughed this much in a while trying to catch my breath hahaha

I just finished this. I never watched Glee but I've gotten into reading Faberry fics (because I like reading random stuff I know nothing about) started last month and I must say this is one of the better ones I've encountered. Kudos and thanks for posting this amazing story.

I know this fic was written many years ago now, but still I wanted to let you know just how wonderfully lovely of a work I think it to be. I was missing these characters so much and this work of true art made my heart absolutely joyous! Thank you so much for having shares this with the world, I truly appreciated it.

This is an excellent story. I've been going backwards and reading each of your stories after first reading the DB series, and I have yet to be disappointed in a single one I've had the privilege of experiencing. The only downside is I can't talk about how much you've improved as an author because even back on this first story you had already set the bar so insanely high. I mean, I can definitely tell that you've improved to an extent, but even on this first attempt at Faberry I had zero complaints. You are truly talented well beyond the average writer, and I only hope that we Faberry fans will be lucky enough to have your muse inspire further tales within the fandom.