Nitris: -spits out energon laughing- Ironhide? Glitch couldn't teach a slug respect

Nitris: why are you rocking back and forth in a corner?
Because it's my favorite ship and it's on the verge of not working.
Nitris: squishies are weird

Please, please update soon!

Wolf whistle
Dat was awesome
Is there anther chappie?

Please update soon love the story.

;_; *tears* nooooo! lol, great job, I already love it!

This is super good! I love this! Keep up the good work!

I'm so glad you're continuing this. Great update :)

Yep earth does weird things, and exactly life finds a way.

Well. I wasn't expecting THAT.

ohhhh this explains alot, :( no seeing jazz punished awwww

I have to agree with everyone: poor Prowl! He's working so hard to win Jazz back because of an argument where I mostly empathize with him anyway. I mean it's not like Prowl insulted Jazz and it's not like Jazz didn't know what he was getting into. And if Prowl's calculations had been accurate then Jazz wouldn't have gotten injured in the first place! So in a way fixing his calculations will lessen the odds of Jazz getting hurt like that in the future. He's protecting his mate and his subordinates! Really it just feels like Jazz went for a below the belt move unprovoked with the cold spark comment. And now he's playing hard to get - which isn't that bad except for the fact that Prowl's now in physical pain! Anyways, please continue this either to the point that Jazz realizes he's been a jerk or until they make progress with their medical conditions.

Well. No one saw that coming did they? lolol.

Every time I hear "life finds a way" I think of Jurassic Park. lol

OMGOMGOMG SPARKLIGYAY! :D What bugs me is everyone always seems to make Prowl and Jazz's first born a femme, even though they're so rare -.-' But hey, maybe you won't and even if you do, you're an amazing writer so who cares?

Now, for the moment I've been waiting for: *runs towards you in slow motion with sunset in background* YOU'RE NOT DEAD! *hugs* Welcome back to the virtual world! :D Don't ever leave me again like that, do you here?

UPDATES PLEASE! -3

Dude, it's like you read my mind when you wrote this chapter 0.0

I just KNEW that one of them was pregnant! I just KNEW it! Jazz with his raging hormonal imbalance and Prowl with his overprotectiveness, I just KNEW it!

I wonder how the rest of the crew will react to this new developement? Protect Bumblebee!