Funny , I think you forgot Hufflepuff 's common room is near the kitchen. You described the ways Percy would have been leading the Gryffindors through.

Not "Wizmount"! The wizarding governing and Judgement bodies is the *Wizengamot*.

I really like this Story. I will go and check what else you have written, but i will place a follow here, in the Hope that you find some Inspiration for a new Chapter here soon

the beginning of the end dumbles the beginning of the end XD

crash and burn dumbles

Hoping you are well and feeling better! Great story so far, I just came across it yesterday. It’s been more than two years since the last update, I hope you are able to update soon, if your health permits!

Re read story again... I hope you finish it. It is very good.

I have enjoyed the story so far...I hope you are feeling better soon and continue writing it. Take care.

I read in your Author’s notes about your appendix bursting in your subsequent illness. I’m glad you recovered and I hope you still are doing well and continue to do well.
This story was recently recommended to me so I have read the whole thing today. If I were reviewing the earlier chapters I would be commenting oh how much I was enjoying the story. I am still interested in where it is going but I am slightly confused and put off by a few things. First was “prank” where Harry supposedly snapped his wand in front of/in response to Dumbledore. But I can look past it not making a ton of sense and accept it for what it was supposed to be. It just seems that your Dumbledore doesn’t make a lot of sense. Is he intended to be quite so... I don’t really know the right word but I guess ineffective and stupid work. Like as an antagonist he is no more worrisome than Draco. Idk it just seems weird.
The other thing was I am honestly at a lost as to the point of the snippets in the Potter Grimoire. I would like to say I love the concept. And it giving Harry a sense of history and his family and that war sucks. But it seems a waste of space except the portion dealing with how the family dealt with squibs. The rest could have been summed up in a single paragraph which is basically what was ultimately done anyway once it was reveals he wrote everyday for the four years.
I don’t know maybe you have plans for it but it seems that with such long breaks in between writing that it was unnecessary. Perhaps that is just where your muse drove you (which I totally respect). But it was a bit off putting.
That said, I am not sure if the story has been abandoned or not or if you don’t know where you are/were going with it. In any case I thought I would try to offer some constructive criticisms. Feel free to totally ignore them lol (like you need my permission :-p ) Anyway Thank you for sharing your writing in the first place.

oh jeez the last part had me tearing up!

I hope that you find your muse for this again. It is a good read, and I like the twists and turns. Thank you :-)

Seems like almost every author I read wishes the same thing! Now then, Fumblemort is gonna have a fit over this! Not only is Sirius free but his Minster of Magic was thrown out of office and arrested to boot! Nothing's going as he planned! His Greater Good is looking to be going down the toilet. Couldn't happen to a more deserving fraud!

I'll say it again. I hope you get well soon. I'm enjoying this story. It's really good. Unlike a certain wonder blunder who can't seem to do anything right or for the Light. I hope they're keeping Snape full of Flushing Draught. If they keep flushing his system anything in it that might help him resist Truth Potion will be flushed out. Then they can use the Truth Potion and know it's working. A few of the questions they should ask are " Can you be forced to take the Dark Mark or must it be voluntary? Name every Death Eater you know. Are you still loyal to the Dark Lord? " Just think of all the fun the DMLE would have with the truthful answers to all of those questions!

Have you noticed how fast Fumblemort is to side with the dark families against the supposed Savior of the wizarding world? Snape, Death Eater. Malfoy Sr., Death Eater. Malfoy Jr., Jr. Death Eater. Crab and Goyle, wannabe Jr. Death Eaters. It's become exceptionally clear that the Ol' Wonder blunder will always side with the Dark. It's also becoming exceptionally clear that Hogwarts is no longer a place of learning for everybody. It's a place of learning for the Dark Families. Fumblemort just doesn't seem to realize just how badly things will go if Harry pulls out of Hogwarts because A, it's unsafe and B, because the Headmaster allows the Jr. Death Eaters to do whatever they want to other students. School? What school? Oh, you mean the former Hogwarts school! Ya, such a pity the Board of Governors allowed it to fail like that.

I hope you get well soon. Well, Fumblemort really fumbled this time! Now he's really lost his weapon! I can't wait to read his reaction to finding out he's no longer Harry's magical guardian. That's really gonna piss him off! Compared to that, this'll be like a mild pout! And I can't wait to read it!