Excellent.

I love this I hope you stretch it out one day

Nice work!

very good

I love Hermonie, so I feel bad for her, but you did a great job in your writing.

Please make a sequel where hErmione finds out and makes Theodore Nott pay within an inch of his life

I Absolutly loved it i wish there was more

cruel cruel. its undeniable. slytherins are just cruel bastards.

i loved it though. that last bit.

its cruel. but it just shows the true colours of slytherin.

Poor Hermione!

This is well-written but so sad! Men like that need to have their testes removed painfully, so I hope he makes it up to her! xD

That is a great short story. It's very uncharacteristic for both of them, but I liked the story nonetheless. It would be great if you continued this. Expanding on their possible relationship. Maybe Nott wants more, realizing that one night with the alluring Granger wasn't enough. But she thinks it was just one moment and doesn't want him back, no matter how many attempts he tries to make. Just a thought, you don't have to change it if you don't want to, it's just a comment. Thanks for the read.

~VampAndWolfLover

i think you should right a sequel but from heroine's pov. because hermione would never let anyone play her like that don't you think? so she's gonna be pretty angry with theo :))

pretty hot! how about a sequel?

Very very good story. I personally would like to see more Theo/Hermione. Please post another :p

Delicious! You set the tone very well - your wording excellent and a slow, sensual pace :) Would love to see more of your work - you did an excellent job encapsulating Theo's personality.

This was great! I really hope you'd consider continuing it! Love this pairing, as much as it's not a common one!

Good job!