I don’t know if you still see these reviews, or read them, but I hope you do.

I really don’t have the words to describe this story. All I can say is that it’s deeply disturbing and completely incredible. I was disappointed to see how long it’s been since you’ve updated it, but I won’t ask you to pick it up again if you don’t want to. What I’d like to ask for is closure. It hurts to see such a unique concept left off like this, and as silly as it may sound, I don’t like the idea of these characters being left in such heartbreaking conditions and mindsets. I want to see them heal and grow.

All I ask is for you to consider posting a summary of sorts, or a timeline, or even just bulletpoints describing where you had planned to take this story and how it would have ended up. I’m sure you lost interest in this long ago, and may not even remember where you were going with it, but if it wouldn’t be too much trouble I’m sure I wouldn’t be the only reader to be extremely grateful.

Whatever you decide, thank you for sharing as much of this story with us as you already have, and have a happy 2018!

Holy writing is amazing. I really hope you do something with writing all of yur life.

"The more you fight against your true nature, the more it will control you." - Magnus Bane :3
This is amazing!

OH my god this story is amazing. This is one of the best Soul Eater AUs I've ever read, perhaps even stories!
What exactly is the definition of a bloodstone, though?

Pardon me and that I'm kind of a neat freak but I couldn't help but notice the site cut out a few mis-spaced words in the review I sent not three minutes ago (whether or not you're still an active user enough to read these, but anyway).

CORRECTED SENTENCE: Truly most every fan loves seeing their favorite characters tortured in some manner occasionally, and I'm no exception but damn, I really felt sympathy or something, ok - for every pain-undeserving character, but especially for Kid.

-correction above being in the two words "but damn", instead of what the site showed as "bu n" when I spaced the letters between 'damn'... (I had to correct it. Because "bun"... how awkward..)

This story was good... uniquely written and overall quite creepy/disturbing much at more than a few points (understandably since the genre is horror) but a fairly bewitching read nonetheless (because I seriously couldn't stop reading).

Admittedly I'm not quite one for morbid tales, at all; seeing these good characters barely surviving in such the mad-ridden world that this plot entails... yeesh, admittedly it was, just, vicariously just painful... (for my weak little heart you stole and have promptly broken with this fic, thank you, not like I needed it anyways).

Truly most every fan loves seeing their favorite characters tortured in some manner occasionally, and I'm no exception bu n, I really felt sympathy or something, ok - for every pain-undeserving character, but especially for Kid.

I mean of all mad things in a maddened world to be possible... the boy being treated like a DOLL beyond appalls me. (And then he had to be kidnapped by the most asymmetrical character. That part mildly amused me - ok it amused me probably more than it should've, especially with DTK's frantic internal monologue - but I still hate Kid being treated/violated like shit by the others. Oh and speaking of the asymmetrical OC that basically saved Tsubaki and now Kid's life from Star, though, I liked her. April seemed interesting as a character.)

Ahem.
Okay so. All my utter rambling and mortification about this AU aside, I digress... that mortification is not aimed at the story in itself of course, 'cause it'd been written with rather fantastic skill. Again despite that I'm not particularly a sucker for the horror genre (I love story-heavy fics but ones with comparably lighthearted tones than this fic entailed) nor even the romance pairing Maka/Crona (as I suspect that's where you planned on taking this?... what with that brush-accidental-kiss and all, y'know) but I will be damned, this story was downright frightening and unbelievably detailed and superb and investing for all it lasted.

Is it me or does everyone want a shinigami. Black star wants them to prove he's surpassed the gods (if kid is alive ands a god than he hasn't) Liz and patty want them cuz of the money , And I'm gonna take a guess thta maka will want him to bring back peace and blah blah no more chaos.

I'm suddenly fearing for Kid's safety.

it's so sad to see such good stories dropped

I really wish you would update this. It's super uber good. You might be distracted, have writer's block for this story, or even no longer care for fanfictions... but this is too ridiculously great to forget about. Kid still has to meet the Thompson sisters. Maka can't be stuck there forever. She has to be saved by Stein or even demon black blood. Kid has to be brought back to life. What will do it? I can't emulate this writing style or story to really help with any writer's block, but I'll try. You need to do a Tsubaki POV chapter first. Write a chapter on Noah's chase. Thompson sisters in danger. A run-in with BlackStar. Tsubaki's life under BlackStar. Giriko even! Introduce new characters:canon or not. Use Gopher to hunt down Kid. Another Kid POV chapter! Maybe Gopher meets Thompson sisters. BlackStar out hunting Mifune in Tsubaki's POV or April's. April finds out about Gopher's hunt for Kid. April meets Thompson twins before they meet Kid. April's POV of Kid some more? Thompson sisters are the last to meet their partner. After they meet, go back to Soul and Maka or develop Tsubaki's thoughts about STAR and Kid. Maybe even BlackStar. You haven't done a BlackStar warming up back story to set Tsubaki and BlackStar rolling! Is he a BLOODSTONE or not? Will he be? Spirit finds Maka and Soul? or Stein? Maybe Marie!? Follow Chrona?
If you really aren't going to continue the story, that's really too bad. No, I guess... It just downright sucks, but then there's not helping it I guess.

maka meets chrona awesome chap 5 heh I could see that.

oh my gosh your writing style is so unique! it's absolutely amazing!
all of the characters are so well written!
hopefully you haven't stopped writing this fic?

Awesome!
its like i can see it.
Way descriptive.

Are you gonna continue this?
Please tell me you're gonna continue this
You have to continue
You must!
This story is amazing! The plot, the storylines, what you've done with each character, tis all so perfect!

Please tell me at some point you will return to this story?