| Reviews for The Not So Great Escape |
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carlea chapter 1 . 3/28/2017 good story |
lilyflower101 chapter 1 . 2/28/2015 Love it! :) |
ullswater chapter 1 . 6/16/2014 You know i don't think i have read a White Collar story where Elizabeth was the disciplinarian but you did a good job of making it very plausible. I enjoyed it. Loved Neals idea of the small fold up plastic hairbrush and Peters answer to that! |
vlwillis chapter 1 . 12/16/2011 Well, written! Love your style. But, how can El be noticing Neal 'Boy he looks kind of hot. No, focus El.' when she has Peter? I think Peter's hotter then Neal... LOL |
wandamarie chapter 1 . 3/13/2011 it was a good one thanks |
Gloworm41 chapter 1 . 2/26/2011 You had several good lines in this awesome little story, but I particularily hooted at "honey, Richard Kimble is back" Great job. |
pechika chapter 1 . 2/16/2011 Very well written. Peter telling Neal "'you have got to be kidding me' look. "Let me put it into perspective for you my young naïve friend, I'm about to get my ass spanked while in the company of my work colleague and amazingly," Peter paused, "I'm NOT the one that handcuffed a love one to a fireplace and left him in hazardous conditions." is my favorite part of the story. |
Fiction Ghost Writer chapter 1 . 1/31/2011 Interesting relationship those three have :) |
BunBunBabe chapter 1 . 1/30/2011 I LOVED this story my favorite scene was the escape attempt by Neal |
peppe1951 chapter 1 . 1/30/2011 I loved this story...my favorite line was: Suddenly, Elizabeth realized for the first time that Peter was attached to the wall and unable to move. Elizabeth walked over and grabbed Neal's ear, pulling it down to the level of her lips. "Is MY husband handcuffed to the fireplace?" Elizabeth spoke in a deadly whispered tone that sent a shiver up Neal's spine. I hope you will write another one soon... |
JeanneZ84 chapter 1 . 1/30/2011 Well,all actions have ? JeanneZ84 |
kenziecaffrey chapter 1 . 1/30/2011 Cute! I loved it! Poor Neal. That must be tough for him to be stuck in that situation with Kate & all, and it must be tougher for Peter because he doesn't want Neal to jack up his life. Loved it! |