This is beautiful. It's filled with symbolism and perfectly captures their relationship.

This was so beautifully written! And it wad just so them! Fantastic!

That was lovely, and, you know, with a little editing you could probably turn it into a poem.

Very interesting. I haven't seen this concept done before, and it works nicely at illustrating their perspectives without pushing the envelope. Both are in character, and it just generally was a good read.

Wow, just: WOW. I'm like, incredibly impressed XD

As Spike would say, this is bloody brilliant!

Seriously, tho, I just finished watching the entire series on Netflix, and I'm so sad! I miss Spike! So, I came here to FFN to see if I could cure what ails me. And let me tell you, this really helps. 3

Spuffy forever! 333

Absolutely marvelous! Keep up the good work :D

I really loved this. I thought you captured the mood rather well. Fantastic job!

Very well written, and packed full of emotion for such a short piece. It manages to capture a bit of angst, a bit of joy, and all the ups and downs of their relationship in an easy, clean sweep. Beautifully done.