I loved it! "social graces of a retarded krogan" LOL. You made my day :D

Constructive cristism: She couldn't stop giggling and laughing and snorting, and it was absolutely ridiculous but she couldn't stop laughing and really, if she had to tell the truth, it felt wonderful to laugh and be held onto by a warm body that she knew wasn't going to leave her, even if she died - too many ands. You need a maximum of three per complex sentence this has double that. Maybe use other connecting words & shorten how long this sentence is. Other than that- not bad. 6/10.

O shepard u amuse me so much excellent story

Awwww~~

I really liked it! Isn't there any kind of sequel in your mind?

*puppy eyes*

I love this, it's so tender and funny. I think Joker is pretty spot on!

Great chapter...Shepard's a bit ooc...but still good. update!

Dropped on via LJ. This is brilliant! I wouldn't worry too much about being OOC for Joker, it feels right to me :D Funny and tender and lovely all at once. Good work!