Reviews for Crawl
aleyaNSYI chapter 40 . 6/2/2016
Heyy not bad..
sumtyms chapter 40 . 1/7/2014
I recently read this story and wow this was just so good! I really hope so that you make a sequel on how they moved on and how thier love prevailed. But none the less this was really really good.
I hope to see you here again but I guess you've moved on your life now. :)
BeautifulHinata1234 chapter 31 . 9/5/2013
LOVE THIS TO NO END!
BeautifulHinata1234 chapter 23 . 9/5/2013
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BeautifulHinata1234 chapter 14 . 7/22/2013
I love really depressing stuff with happy endings.. hopefully its has a good one
BeautifulHinata1234 chapter 2 . 7/21/2013
I know this is old... but its really good I love it
Guest chapter 40 . 3/31/2013
.i wish it had a part 2
Guest chapter 40 . 3/20/2013
i dont like the ending its so sad why did she had to give up her daughter no fair is their a sequel for this
DanieruChann chapter 40 . 2/24/2013
This was an amazing story! I really really enjoyed it! I hope you will consider and write a sequel, I feel it would be great and would love to read it. I even cried at the end of this fanfic, it made me so sad at what Ino and Shikamaru had to deal with, I cried for a long time and when I finished it, I was so pleased and happy with how it turned out. I would love to read a sequel of how Shikamaru and Ino move on from this and there future relationship. If you don't write a sequel, that's okay to but I still hope to read future story's from you, your a great writer. I love to read story's with Ino and Shikamaru, or Ino and whoever, occasionally Tenten and Neji. Just please keep writing and I hope to read more of your story's in the future!
DrkRose chapter 40 . 2/17/2013
Aweeeee, Okay i loved this story.
It was so good! She went throw alot and i cryed when she gave her baby! You did an awesome job with the story i hope that you wright a 2end one to it! 3 very good job!
Guest chapter 40 . 1/27/2013
The ending's quite depressing...but good anyways. :) (thumbs up)
Guest chapter 9 . 1/27/2013
Fart..seriously! That just kinda' ruined the whole creepy and intense moment.
Guest chapter 40 . 12/30/2012
I absolutaly loved how long and detailed this story was! I was really surprised that Ino gave the baby away at the end but, personaly I didn't mind cuz, I prefer Ino non-pregnant in stories anyway. I'm not trying to be blunt but, I really wish you would've made Ino stronger. For example, she could've put up a fight when she got raped. I liked how there were lots of different points of views throught the story! And I was impressed with how many chapters consisted in this book! It gave me many days of reading! (more like, months)
Thanks for sharing your creation on Fanfiction and I can't wait to read more! :)

P.S. Thanks for suporting Shikaino and NaruSaku! (those are my favorite couples)
I'm Not A Princess chapter 40 . 12/30/2012
A sequel would be nice :)
Hakkai Suiren chapter 40 . 12/22/2012
This is... It's the best Ino/Shikamaru story I have ever read. I found myself sniffling and crying at some parts then laughing at others. Absolutely beautiful. I wouldn't mind an epilogue or even a sequel. I would be looking forward to reading them when and if you ever decide to do them. :)
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