Reviews for Little Comrade
mycookiesgaara chapter 1 . 11/13/2018
There is only one plot whole in your story. A male dhampir can not get a female dhampir pregnant. it is explained in the books
my 2 guys chapter 47 . 6/27/2017
that was good
Guest chapter 5 . 1/21/2017
You might wanna correct the 5th last line... Shouldn't it be gentle?
Guest chapter 7 . 1/10/2017
Compulsion not computation. Two totally different words!
alicia chapter 7 . 7/30/2016
i kept getting confused its compulsion not computation good tho
Guest chapter 15 . 6/20/2016
Why couldn't dimitri just have had a rind like everyone else? If he is also part of the trial.
May carnival chapter 14 . 6/20/2016
You should probably cheack your spelling but other than that it is one of the best fan fictions that I have ever read.
steph91744 chapter 15 . 3/2/2016
tasha turn strigo and escapes from jail
LittleMissDramione chapter 24 . 1/28/2016
Seriously u need a beta! I'm loving the story but it needs to be proofread so ur spelling is correct
Guest chapter 39 . 1/14/2016
Serious, since
Guest chapter 33 . 1/14/2016
This is really good but please proof read your work!
Guest chapter 32 . 1/14/2016
Second
AwesomeSauce chapter 7 . 5/21/2015
I love it, but im pretty sure its compulsion not what you said
booklion4 chapter 24 . 10/30/2014
Where in the world has this story gone?
booklion4 chapter 7 . 10/28/2014
You realize that instead of typing compulsion your typing computation. BTW This is constructive criticism.
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