| Reviews for Little Comrade |
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mycookiesgaara chapter 1 . 11/13/2018 There is only one plot whole in your story. A male dhampir can not get a female dhampir pregnant. it is explained in the books |
my 2 guys chapter 47 . 6/27/2017 that was good |
Guest chapter 5 . 1/21/2017 You might wanna correct the 5th last line... Shouldn't it be gentle? |
Guest chapter 7 . 1/10/2017 Compulsion not computation. Two totally different words! |
alicia chapter 7 . 7/30/2016 i kept getting confused its compulsion not computation good tho |
Guest chapter 15 . 6/20/2016 Why couldn't dimitri just have had a rind like everyone else? If he is also part of the trial. |
May carnival chapter 14 . 6/20/2016 You should probably cheack your spelling but other than that it is one of the best fan fictions that I have ever read. |
steph91744 chapter 15 . 3/2/2016 tasha turn strigo and escapes from jail |
LittleMissDramione chapter 24 . 1/28/2016 Seriously u need a beta! I'm loving the story but it needs to be proofread so ur spelling is correct |
Guest chapter 39 . 1/14/2016 Serious, since |
Guest chapter 33 . 1/14/2016 This is really good but please proof read your work! |
Guest chapter 32 . 1/14/2016 Second |
AwesomeSauce chapter 7 . 5/21/2015 I love it, but im pretty sure its compulsion not what you said |
booklion4 chapter 24 . 10/30/2014 Where in the world has this story gone? |
booklion4 chapter 7 . 10/28/2014 You realize that instead of typing compulsion your typing computation. BTW This is constructive criticism. |