I really love this story and sincerely hope it hasn't been abandoned. Keep writing, I need to know what happens! :p

Good chapter!

It's getting quite Interesting and well paced now. Can't wait to read the next chapter!

I don't like this Nida... Seems a bit too eager to be friends with rinoa.

Just finished reading chapter 2. Had to re-read chapter one as well since it's been a while.

I like these short chapters and am hooked on the diary entries... What are the Fated Children about? Where's squall? What's wrong with him? Why is Seifer mean to Rinoa?

This story is so unique and interesting I can't wait to get to the end.

Ooooooh! I'm squealing! This is sooooooooooooooo good. I loved this chapter as much as the last even though they were both so different! The last was angsty and smart and mature. This one was fun, yet dripping with anxiety and depression and fear. So, so good. I loved Squall's answer to Nida. It was great. But then another unexpected happened...I began to mistrust that poor, poor boy. Nida! I did not see him on the possible suspect list in the least. Crazy!

Great, thrilling read Muk. Seriously amazing!

Whoa! This chapter! I knew you'd posted one a few weeks ago and I had it in my mind to read it when time allowed. To refresh I did the one prior, this. I can't believe I missed it somehow. And it was so freaking good. I'm impressed, M. Seriously impressed. I know you to be a great writer, particularly in the plot department, but this...you are seriously wrapping some of the mystery up in such a profound way as to make it seem even more dangerous and thrilling than I'd even expected. You are really blossoming as a writer by delving into the political sphere as well. I kept thinking, is this really Muk who's written such sweet romances? It was like a whole new you. OK...now I'm on to the next chapter. When you are finished I will definitely be reading this from start to finish once again. This is one of my favorite stories in the fanfiction kingdom. And even the world beyond . :)

Also, as to your question about whether you should let LBD become what it wants to be, there is no question. The Novel i'm currently writing is based on a similar, albeit a mythological premise, but the characters become what they want, and influence the story in ways that I don't expect. A lot of the time it is really neat, but it means i need to let go of what I originally planed. People grow, and so do their stories. Some of your stories have their charm because of the way you use the FF8 characters. But others, like LBD only use them as placeholders for your own characters. So as long as we are give the means to find this book of yours when you are done with it, I doubt any of your readers will begrudge you your story. There is a stigma attached to fanfiction, (and to twilight), but that is not a legitimate hurdle. All the best.

"Tomorrow you dine with me". nice. Looks like the plot thickens, I'm actually unsure if Nida is or isn't a plant. OR rather, i'm unsure of whether you are the kind of Author to write him as such. I guess i'll have to keep my eyes and eyes open.

Oooo maaaaan. You know what I never really thought about Nida really following her around being a bad things. Squall saying he was her boyfriend made me giggle. I can't wait to see what he has to say about that. XD

Uh-oh, it sounds like Nida might be a bad guy? I wasn't expecting that! Interesting that Squall is quick to claim to be Rinoa's boyfriend...

Keep up the good work!

I'm liking your story. I'm feeling bad for Nida though. Is Rinoa just using him? Poor Nida.

This chapter was really good to be honest. It had me at the edge of my seat. I really did think n that they was going to find her in that toilet

What I did find less inserting was the like class debate thing at the begging I did think it dragged on for a little bit longer than expected. (I hope that doesn't sound offensive I really don't mean it to be)
Other than that its all good cant wait for the next chapter

loved this chapter once again . It would have been even more interesting if Seifer had followed her. But other than that it was all amazing as per usual