it was really sweet and adorable and then

fuCK

I love this story, please, for the love of god continue!

Oh my gosh, it would have been so perfect... Oh well. Great story! I loved it! )

ARGH! I love Aqua/Zack! I ship it harder than I ship Zack/Aerith. I didn't except to find any fics.

But this is awesome. I like how you incorporated Aerith into your fic. A bit sad yes, but I do hope in BBS II, if they ever make it, they have Zack again.

any plans for second? :D awesome stuff and originality

Ah~~ It was cute then turned sad. don't worry i like your overdescribing haha o good job~

This is...dedicated to me...? I swear, my heart skipped a beat or three, and I had to put my hand over it to make sure it was still working right. Hahaha! Is this how it feels like to have something dedicated to you? I am touched, overwhelmed, flattered, honored, and thoroughly amused especially by the last line of your dedication. X3

Anyway, on to the actual Review! This was amazing! The interactions between Zack and Aqua were sweet and fluffy and amazing! Zack was spot on, in my opinion, which made him so adorable. And I like how you chose a setting outside the KH Universe. There were many lines in the story that I simply loved, but they would be too many to list down.

If there is anything that upsets me about this story, it's the end! Please, please, please do not end this with Aqua in pain...

And you are going to continue this, right? I hope you do. But, so far, you have done wonderfully. And, once again, thank you so much.

~Alacquiene~

LOVED IT~!

I love this story. Having played Birth by Sleep and Crisis Core lately I really needed something like this! Thanks for your awesomeful writing!

No! It can't end there with a sad ending! Aqua needs the happiness after she lost everything and everyone close to her. Please say that there will be another chapter or a sequel.