awesome story man, I totally love it!

Excellent dialogue! You can hear the characters saying the words perfectly. Great story :)

I love this. I love that Espo knows Jenny's number just in case. And that me and your mom Joe was hilarious. I cracked up when Kev said that besides the fact it was funny. I loved this. Very well . Written.

Aww, sweet. My favorite bit was Espo having Jenny's number and his concern that Ryan would be mad. My favorite line is: "I told a Yo Momma joke that almost got you killed!"

yay! I love those two! I shall now think of this every time I watch Knockdown, or the one in season 3 where they find out about Monty

Excellent story, I hope you write more stories on these two characters.

I just thought I'd let you know, that after the changes, their friendship stands out all the more.

I love how you show that they are friends and brothers, and their trust in each other.

The episode was lacking a great scene like this.

Love it :)

I've missed that part on the espisode, and I like it very much :)

Wow! What a difference a little rewording makes! I really liked the story in its 1st draft - but by toning down the reactions I think you actually brought them out a little more. Sounds just right now.

One weak point of " Knockdown " is the lack of

an ending scene between Ryan and Esposito. I'll never know why they don't split in in two episodes or at least stretched it to a 50 minute episode.

Thx for writing this little fic. I don't think Ryan would blame Esposito for his joke. That's a little OOC in my opinion but anyway, I like the friendship between those two. And this one, you write really good. It would be great to read more of you!

Thx for sharing.

Awww! We definitely needed something like this. It made me SO angry that we didn't even get like a clip of these guys. Thank you for writing this. :)

This was really cute.

I can't really picture Ryan being pissed about the whole "me and your mom" thing because he laughed in the episode, but you write the situation really well. I can see this kind of thing happening if Ryan were to get mad at Esposito.

Keep writing!

Awesome, awesome job. Loved it! :D

I agree that the episode was missing a scene like this! I love how you made them sound like old friends.

However, I don't think Ryan would be mad at Esposito. I mean, he laughed at the joke, and he understood that they were protecting their friends.

Otherwise, I enjoyed this!