I am shocked a great deal because Nanoha in the entire series has no interest in any males, and it carries over when gets older to the point of Fate, and her not only living together but adopting a child.

This of course fully supports the belief that they are both lesbians I could be wrong in my interpretation.

The thing that interest me is how Negi’s story ended because after he met his parents he was cursed by Magia Erebia, which granted him incredible magical power but immortality as well including not been able to have children.

Looking pretty good. Though needed to do some googling cos I haven't read the nanoha series

The problem with the story does Negi have the burden of immortality and enormous power he gathered in that Arc in the magical world because he became a apprentice to Evangeline, and gained a incredible power with a heavy price having both immortality and also unable to have children for his immortality.

sounds like... should we be expecting the dark hour or midnight channel to come back?

"About as useless as a flashlight in a lighthouse factory"

Wtf dude? Hahaha! I don't know if I want to cheer a line this crazy, or throw popcorn at the screen. Well played. Well played.

That... Was expected. I forsaw this ever since Fate got injured and didn't do a dark magic purification. But what happened next... Well, let's see what else to you got!

It's been several calm chapters now. They are great and all, but my soul carves for combat! And now the promised time is here!

Right, Negi was In the same area like Hayate, so maybe he cought the same magical bug...

The usual shenanigans are usual...

You actually did it. Eternal Negi Feaver. GJ! So my projection about the progress of Negima and this fic's age Was wrong... And boy am I glad to be wrong. And answering your question at the bottom of the chapter, because he thought that it was Negi who hurt her.

I see. This story is older than the Negima ending, so you had to take a few liberties with the magical world Incident. Unfortunately that most likely means no pro armament, but meh, I can live with that. Nice chapter, quite funny. Especially the Omake.

Oh right, Kamo did have the tendency to order laced chocolate and all.. Thanks for reminding me.

Nice chapter. The moment I made the logical connection between those two series, well I don't think I need to continue that thought. At the part where Kamo was introduced to the class, you accidentally named Nanoha as Asuna.

Huh. Always do wonder how cannon characters would react to their fan fic counterparts. Or historical ones to their fictional portrayal. Or mythical ones to more modern versions of them. How would Abraham Lincoln react to Abraham Lincoln Vampire Slayer? Or Zeus to the Percy Jackson Series? Or Hell, Druids to a game of DnD where some one was playing the Druid class. Or Merlin( the guy who inspired the legend, some mad seer who lived in the woods) to... everything with Merlin in it...

This was definitely a sweet chapter.